|Reviews for Time Warp|
| plume de phenix chapter 7 . 1/2/2013
I really like your story, it could have a bit more twists and surprises, but it's much better than many other FF's I read ;)
For your french, it's really cute you know :P If you liked to put it correctly just change these things, but you can keep it that way, it's really funny!
(tu dois attendre you have to wait/ LETTER:
Comment vas-tu? Moi, je vais bien. J'adore ton premier et ton deuxième nom...On se voit demain! C'est bien, non? Je t'aime! À demain, Léon/ Where are you going Vous allez où?/ What's wrong qu'est-ce qui ne va pas?/ My friends and my boyfriend mes amis et mon petit copain/ your boyfriend ton petit copain/No, that's impossible Non, c'est impossible)
Greets, pdp :)
| Guest chapter 30 . 12/27/2012
IHATE YOU DUMBLEDORE!
| elijahlover chapter 41 . 12/4/2012
I LOVE IT XXX
| G Fawkes chapter 6 . 12/3/2012
NO! You WOULDN'T!
Ok, for fear that you are about to bring Ginny back in time ... thus making me HURL... I am gonna' quit reading, now... and PLEASE people if you're going to write a HP/GW story, then PUT THAT IN THE STORY DESCRIPTION LINE. Not Harry/James, and time travel romance. To me, that meant Harry is a WORLD away from the smelly, dirty, potion brewing, broom-closet HO, that is the youngest Weasley skank. (let that insinuate what it will about Molly... maybe I should have said 'Prewett skank', and not defamed Arthur)
I am currently reading a Harry/multi that includes Ginny, but it is LITERALLY only the 2nd one out of nearly 300, that I have willingly read. Canon is CRAP, and the movie Ginny ruined it for me.
| G Fawkes chapter 5 . 12/3/2012
All this reviewer appreciation 'stuff' reminds me of Luna and her saying "It's almost like having real friends." (sniff)
Just think... this is all written 5-7 years ago... you could have INVENTED Twitter and been a bazillionaire, instead of living your social life on the pages of fanfic.
Fic related: I know this isn't 'that' fic, but HP should have given the marauders and Lily a 'detention' and spilled the entire truth, everything, to them, INCLUDING telling Peter that he was a traitorous rat in his time line. At least they wouldn't ever trust him, and he could never sell them out. AND... the 'boys' wouldn't be jealous of Harry, even if they're a little wierded out by James being his dad.
| G Fawkes chapter 3 . 12/3/2012
Ah, the good old days (Snape-like smirk) when A/N's were almost as long as chapters, and every single person who ever reviewed was mentioned or even answered. Thank goodness for social media nowadays (loads of shite otherwise), to give these people something to do, and get OFF the fic pages!
Regarding the actual fic content... if I were HP, and cast in a story where Ginny had some way-too-canon-ish type relationship with me, I'd do anything to time travel away, jump to an A/U, or even just AK myself. Seems like th a/u stuff is going to be a pretty cool story, though... as long as Lily doesn't go and throw herself at Harry...ew! (shudder)
OMG! I just realized Harry gets to 'influence' a young Snape!
| G chapter 2 . 5/25/2012
The test was a pansy. But ooooh, I just adore marauder/harry I'm simply content with reading another!
| G chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Well, that could have been written better. I hardly believe that was what Harry would do, specially with voldemort running amok and all
| Y.K.Willstone chapter 41 . 12/14/2011
This story is awesome so glad you didn't give up on it.
Just off to read the sequal.
| anonymus chapter 15 . 9/18/2011
I like the story. Sirius is engaged to me that means! (my surnames lala)
| Pyroaerie chapter 33 . 7/16/2011
What? WHAT? That's it? Just "Oh, Ginny, sorry" I thought there would be resistance! Oh, your story's gotten really good! I'm so glad it's complete though. I think I would die waiting for the next chappie. ;d
| xXRedxRosesXx chapter 10 . 6/28/2011
This story just got really sucky. there are lots of spelling errors and the characters are hard to follow. it's a decent idea. I would suggest a major re-vamp and re-write.
| Fantasy-nat chapter 7 . 4/15/2011
You're probably not reading the reviews anymore but just in case the correct traduction for the letter would be:
Chère Anne-Marie Danielle, comment va tu? Je vais bien. J'adore ton premier et ton deuxième prénom... Je te verrais demain! C'est super, non? Je t'aime, à demain, Léon.
| TaxiLights chapter 5 . 3/17/2011
I love this story, I really do (i've already read it and, i'm back!) but Harry's character is a bit off. He's too arrogant, and quite frankly the male Mary-Sue. He is the main one I have noticed, and overall, I think the characters need a little more depth, and to add complexity to their relationships. They just don't seem real at the moment.
Anyway, your dedication is amazing, and your style is rather awesome, also... :) x
| ginny evans chapter 23 . 3/5/2011
first off, i really like this fun and fastpased and im having funreading it! also good choice- i love the story persuing lily evans..its so sad tho!