|Reviews for Time Warp|
| Sapphire.Ice.Rose chapter 41 . 5/21/2009
Great Story! :) :) I'm going to read the next one now :) :P
| poser16 chapter 6 . 4/13/2009
great story! love it.
the only problem-the character Anne-Marie should have brown hair. My name's Anne-Marie and well, suffice to say i'm biased towards brunettes with curly/wavy hair :P
other than that-
i love it :)
| Petitpoivronquicourt chapter 7 . 1/20/2009
Am I wrong to say you used a translator for your quotes in French? If you tell me yes you’re wrong I won’t believe you.
You actually did a few mistakes, but that’s because most of the translators translate word by word.
And that’s how I know you used one of them.
But I’m willing to correct them for you.
So if you okay, just tell me.
| xHarryPotterANDTwilight4EVERx chapter 7 . 1/17/2009
i like it! XD
| Mo chapter 41 . 1/12/2009
You wrote this a while ago.. but IS such a good story, one more voice is telling you so.
| Emily chapter 15 . 1/8/2009
er,sorry,but i THINK its chienne
| Rori Potter chapter 40 . 1/3/2009
| BlueGate chapter 7 . 12/16/2008
Im sorry, but I skipped most of the MASS TALK FEST that you thought would be a good idea to include in your story. Geez it was WAY to confusing. You may want to edit it. I mean, it captures the... energy of the situation, but still, it would be better if it was more refined. Having 7-8 people all talking in one scene seems abit excessive also. Just a thought anyway.
| annamashi89yahoo.de chapter 10 . 11/12/2008
I thought this story could be interesting - until you startet with this stupid Witch-SMS-Thing. It is like the most stupid and most annoying thing ever invented...
They live in the same house, visiting the same places - they could just talk like normal people. And during the lessons they still have normal pen and paper.
Sorry, but i am getting really crazy with this whole "i stupd 4 normal gramr - fuck grammr or decent conversations" thing.
Maybe its because i am not a native speaker, but anyway - I just can not continue reading this stuff.
But i liked the idea, if this helps.
Have a good night,
| Make war not love. war is fun chapter 41 . 10/6/2008
cool story hope u update soon
| Cathycalamitous chapter 41 . 10/4/2008
OMG...THIS IS AWESOME! YOU BETTER BE UPDATING THE SEQUEL! .
| I bashed Voldie's head chapter 41 . 9/6/2008
This is absolutely brilliant! I love it how you mash up Harry's and everyone else's stories, making both just as interesting. I'm going to go read the other one now. 10/10! WOW!
| eeniemeenie chapter 10 . 8/25/2008
Great story. I love that song in Les Miserables, btw :]
| Tayk chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
Rather unrealistic, don't you think? Look at it this way:
Harry: Oh, would you looky here, I'm covered in blood in the Hogwarts grounds! I must have been transported back in time. Well, guess I'll ask for a teaching position even though I have absolutely no bloody idea how to teach anything.
Dumbledore: Sure, random stranger, we always need a Defense teacher! I'll give you an interview even though you're clearly in need of medical attention because I trust you *that much*!
Harry: A'right! -thumbs up-
I don't mean to flame, but it is a bit... well, I don't think it'd really work. I'll keep reading. I think this story has some potential. If you ever want to revise, though, I'd consider fleshing the intro out, making it more believable.
| PrettyFanGirl chapter 11 . 7/23/2008
Nice! This is taking a really long time to read!