Reviews for Beloved, Bereft
InkyManipulation chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Wow. Just wow. This is wonderfully sad, you've got me crying at my keyboard. Beautifully done!

Mand'alor chapter 1 . 8/5/2008
Great story, easy favorite!

I always figured though that yuan would tie into Phantasia in some vague way _ And he is back in DotNW/KoR

Just one thing though, what about when yuan saves Kratos at Origins seal?
Contraltissimo chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
A couple of things...

"the one who's name once graced this ring" (whose)

"And as it's fronds spread" (its)

Wow, that was sad! Horribly, wonderfully, deliciously sad! You sure know how to paint sorrow. That was a beautiful view through his eyes. Nice work!

-Grammar Nazi
The Minamotos chapter 1 . 3/8/2006

Aw, how sad!

Poor Yuan...

I wondered what happened to him in the end.

Great story, really cute. :)

And you're right; Yuan doesn't get nearly enough fanfics.

Go Yuan! X3
Fan Fan Girl chapter 1 . 3/6/2006
Wow... That had some _really_ good, like _excellent_ lines... Overall, I was incredibly impressed. Sometimes I got anxious with all the prose, but I could see how it was building up. And there were times that I felt genuine sadness... Excellent.

Also, a wonderful point that you brought up. People are just selfish. They make justifications for their motives, when really they're making elaborate excuses. It's interesting that Yuan realizes that he just wants to end his own suffering by destroying Martel.

Nice work! _