I hate Ginny/harry ship too much to read this fic. A pity

As i feared it s a stupid ginny harry ship fic. I went to the last page to have a peak. So nope. This is not for me. It s really a pity as i love time travel fics !

I simply hate the ginny harry ship too much. I almost never read fics with those and when i do because the story is too good, it still spoils it for me. She s a stalking fan girl, and i hate the idea that she gets her wish to marry the boy who lived and probably the wish of all her family to finally get out of poverty through harry.. Ron 's bouts of jealousy are probably the most honest thing that family shows.. And they are all dumbeldore' s followers and so let harry be abused at the dursleys and then bought his eternal gratitude over some food or a hug, when if they were decent poeple they'd have explained to him about his family name and how to better his life through gringotts and some renewable food box, or cadt notice me not on his things at the dursleys or gave him the name of a healer, anything really, but they helped Dumbledore 's schemes to keep him ignorant of most his rights or privileges.. Of course he ll marry their stalker fan girl when he has no social skills and no other acquaintances and he s been groomed to believe himsemf unworthy

Very good fanfiction

"It has just occurred to me Harry," Albus stated, "that I have temporarily gone death and haven't heard a word of what you just said."
It's deaf not death.
Honestly, how could you mix the word for not being able to hear with the word meaning dead?

Please add more chapters. It’s been 7 years since you last updated!

Harry titisan Dumbledore ini wkwkwk

Sorry man, either you’re very young or from a country where English isn’t part of the school curriculum, but your story is so riddled with mistakes, unneeded long explanations, completely wrongly used words and other mistakes, it’s pretty much unreadable. Too bad, but I can’t take another 60 chapters of this.

Kinda fun story, but the amount of typos and misspellings is kinda hard to ignore. This needs a beta, or a good once-over.

So Mike doesn’t like the direction of the story and resigned. Better off without him if this is the level of betaing he does.

Personally I don’t know what it was that Lily saw in boy like Severus even as a friend I mean good god the man is rude, has sadistic streak, holds a grudge, practices the dark arts, and had a very unhealthy obsession with Lily. I mean granted he was secretly protecting Harry, but did red him to Harry ask for Snape’s help no he didn’t, Harry hated Snape and personally I think he should have broken his jaw for all the vile crap he spewed about him being spoiled and arrogant. He didn’t know a dam thing about Harry it’s galling that Dumbledore him to teach potions despite his utter hatred of children, had tried any of that bullshit in the real world his prejudice, insult spewing arse would have been sacked so fast and then sued his head would be spinning. There is absolutely no room in the magical education world for people like him and His prejudices period. He made his bed when he sided with Voldemort let the bastard rot in Azkaban prison and see what being guarded 24/7 by dementors does to him.

ehm not bad, but so many uncesary twist or draman between har and gin, but in generally terms nor bad and so sad than this never finished

I really like this story but I really feel like your abusing the dementors ability to make harry remember his "past" for us. It was fine once or twice but it just seems way to convenient that they keep being around to progress the story. with Harry's occlumency shields and his skill with magic it's not really believable that he keeps dropping the second they get close. I'm finding it personally very annoying and feel it's taking away from the story. while this review could seem negative I am trying to be constructive. this is a truly wonderful read and I'm glad I'm reading it

Lol, in the books Harry had to really train to master the Accio spell in his 4th year and now here Hermione does it just by hearing the incantation once without any experience.

In canon the letters came days before his birthday. Hagrid arrived on the clock on his birthday.