Reviews for Taken
bubblesquirt chapter 8 . 6/14/2007
But the fingers weren't meant to violate or be sensual. They were feeling. Testing. The way someone would test a slab of meat for tenderness, tautness, soft spots. It made bile rise up in the back of Sam's throat. - Dude. Gross.

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"The little fella decided to wake up," Lyle sneered, his face scrunching and bringing another strem of blood and puss from his eye. Sam grimaced. - Yuck! Dude, you seriously are talented.

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Dean spit at Lyle, his face drawn, disgusted. "Oh yeah? Well go find some sheep to fuck." - Haha, awesome!

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"You're strangely poetic for a backwoods hick," Dean said calmly. - Once again, awesome. You write Dean so well!

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"So what, I'm invincible? Sweet."

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"Oh," Dean whispered. "Not sweet."

"Definitely," Sam agreed.

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Again, I am loving this story. You write both the boys brilliantly.
bubblesquirt chapter 7 . 6/14/2007
"Gonna get me a happy meal," Dean muttered, a long sigh following.

"That's McDonald's, man," Sam said absently - Ha. Cute.

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Dean coughed, wet and sick. - Awesome detail. I know exactly which cough this is. And it made me grimace.

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"Whatever," Dean said and looked around, though his eyes were half closed. "Man, when do I get my super power? Yours is lame." - Haha. Made me laugh out loud.

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"Come on, tell me why I heard you singing Fiona Apple in the shower the other day."

"What?" He shocked. Dean's voice was stronger now. His eyes focused a bit. - It's so touching how the boys know each other so well.

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"I'm just tired."

"I know," Sam said. "You've lost a lot of blood..."

"No," Dean shook his head, which turned out to be a bad thing as the world spun and Sam had to help him to the ground. But Dean kept talking through it. "I'm tired. I'm tired of waiting for Dad to call. Of waiting for this demon to show his face. Of waiting for Sam to leave again." Sam frowned at that. - Gasp.

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E! Lyle's back! Well, I already knew that cause I've already read this story but it's still freaking me out! The boys never get a break, do they? Can't believe I haven't reviewed all the way up to this point yet. I'm such a slacker sometimes..
bubblesquirt chapter 6 . 6/14/2007
But Dean sat back and kept his eyes closed, struggling to get his body under control again, struggling to keep the pain from his face, struggling to keep the tears behind closed eyes. Sam just waited, his hands squeezing Dean's shoulder while the other was holding a piece of his shirt to the wound, which had started to bleed again. "Jesus," he whispered under his breath as he watched Dean's teeth start to chatter. - So sad.

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"Well serves you right for running around in your underwear," Sam scolded playfully, watching as a grin stole its way onto Dean's face. - Yay he's cheering up Dean!

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Dean eyed it for a moment. "Oh, fuckers..." he grunted and let Sam put it around his neck. - He's still got some fire left in him. Go get em!

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"Hey, the kid skinned up pretty good," Keith said. "He'd make a nice lampshade." - So disturbing. You're doing a good job of making me hate these bad guys..

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No," Dean shook his head, his eyes drooping again, breath slowly wheezing out. But a smile crept onto his face and his eyes narrowed, almost devilishly. "I was thinking more like drowning you in a meat boiler." - Haha awesome.

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"I'm gonna have fun making you scream." - *shiver*

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Sam had never wanted to kill another man. But he'd do so, because in this job, you do things you don't want to. - I love how you always bring it back to their Dad and what he would say, do, tell them to do, because ultimately you know that's what's always on their minds. Because they were raised that way. To be soldiers.

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Dean had never wanted to pull a meat hook from his shoulder and snap his collar bone to save his younger brother from a madman backed by a demon. But he'd done so, because in this job, you do things you don't want to.

But Dean had never wanted to do anything more. - Awesome ending to another awesome chapter. I'm so glad I decided to reread this amazing story!
bubblesquirt chapter 5 . 6/13/2007
Dean kept his eyes closed for a second, though sighed to let Alex know that he'd heard him. He didn't really feel like opening his eyes. The nausea, the blood loss, the pain, it all just made Dean want to go to sleep, to curl up in his bed and wake up safe and cozy and warm with Sam sleeping closeby, nightmare free.

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Once again, your paragraphs of description are perfect.

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"Ow! Fuck, stop it!" Dean yelled as Sam's hand jerked and the hook jarred inside Dean's shoulder. - ah. i'm wincing and gritting my teeth at this! e!

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"I mean he's just a sidekick, but I was thinking about giving him a promotion pretty soon." - Cute.

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Keith grinned and before Sam or Dean could think of a way to stop them, Keith grabbed Alex's head with both arms and gave a hard push. - whimper... but why?

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Another awesome chapter! E! (I say e out loud when I get really excited.. hehe:)
bubblesquirt chapter 4 . 6/13/2007
Maybe this was some sort of deep down Freudian bullshit making them want to be more like their father. - Haha. I learned about all that in my Psych class. Crazy.

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Why not some car that didn't scream "look at me" to everyone it passed by. This was a pretty flashy car for someone who lived so secretively. Not that Dean ever chose his cars for practicality. -Ha! I've often wondered this. And now that the Feds are after them, you'd think they'd try for something a little more inconspicuous, but we all know Dean would never give his baby up!

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He turned around and looked for a place to hide. Spotting a table at the far edge of the room, he dashed to the center and flicked the light off. - Could Sam fit under a table? This is so freaking suspenseful and I've already read this story before!

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"You're a sick kid, Alex," Dean joked and Alex rolled his eyes. - Cute.

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"I'm not going to eat your stupid food!" Alex yelled and stood defiantly for a moment with his fists clenched. "So you can kiss my ass!" he added for good measure. Dean's eyebrows rose at that. He couldn't help but think, you go, girl. - HILARIOUS!

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NO. They found Sam? And they freaking stabbed and immobilized Dean? I'm freaking out over here. This story is so amazing! :)
bubblesquirt chapter 3 . 6/13/2007
"Please," he said, wincing when his voice shook. - So Sam. I can picture this exactly.

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Sam could have laughed at that statement. Oh buddy, this was as personal as it got.

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They were in a fucking slaughter house. - Freaking creepy and an awesome way to end the chapter! Yay!
bubblesquirt chapter 2 . 6/13/2007
I can't believe I haven't reviewed every single chapter of this amazing story! As always, here are some favorite parts:

Sam could only lie to himself about so many things. - You capture Sam's despair beautifully.

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"Nice clubhouse you got here." There was no answer. "I didn't know they were giving away free memberships." - Very Dean.

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Dean held up a hand. "Wait, wait," he said and Alex stared at him with wide eyes. "They're human?" God, what was it with people and wanting to kidnap them lately? Dean shivered as he remembered his friend the fire poker.

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"Dammit, Dean," he cursed as he ran outside to the Impala. "You sure know how to pick them." - Yay! Sammy figured it out!

I'm amazed at how well you write. I love all the description. I think I've said this before, but usually I have to scan over an author's attempt at paragraphs and paragraphs of description and get to the dialogue, but with you, you make it seem so easy. You catch my attention and never let it go. :)
bubblesquirt chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
"Cops aren't good for nothing except to entertain me at three in the morning when I get to watch them chase around half naked dudes on tv." - Funny.

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"Looks like you've got some fans," Sam said quietly. "You had to pick the two biggest guys in the room, didn't you?"

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"You wanna try to hit my little brother again, bitch?" Dean yelled. - Oh. Go Dean!

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"Besides, you got hit in the head, thought it was only fair if I did too. Didn't want to feel left out."

"Ass," Sam spat playfully. - Cute.

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Dean put a hand to his ear and leaned a bit towards Sam. "Dude, I can't hear you. The ringing in my ears is too loud." - Hahaha! Dude, I love Dean. Well.. your Dean.. you know what I mean.

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Sam sent his eyes to the ceiling almost subconsciously. He took in the plain whiteness of it and then realized what he was doing and looked away. - So sad.

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I was thinking about your stories today and how you hadn't updated in a while and I just wanted to let you know that I miss you! This story is one of my favorites so I wanted to reread it and make sure I review every chapter.
Xdaisy chainX chapter 11 . 4/30/2007
whoa what a ride!

wicked fic! excellent concept. so creepy! this was an excellent piece of writing. I was hooked *no pun intended* from start to finish!

poor alex, you wrote the funeral beautifully. short but oh so emotion filled!

poor dean, he got a bit beaten up didnt he lol

bless him

loved it all! kudos!

XsarahX
Indus chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
Unremarkable score? Ouch- it's kinda mine too, and it didn't feel so unremarkable at the time...

Got into a top 3 school with it but ironically enough, I was rejected by Stanford for the second time. For some reason, that school has it in for me...

Anyway, great story. Keep em coming!
heather03nmg chapter 11 . 3/8/2007
Aw...that was super sad, poor Alex. Great story, plenty of hurt Dean and worried Sammy, my favorite. Keep writing, you're amazing with the angst!
Jennygeee chapter 11 . 12/10/2006
I am so sorry that I haven't reviewed this before - I read it a few weeks ago and really thought I had left a review. This was an amazing story, full of action and angst - what more could you ask! So sad that Alex had to die- he was so cute and reminded Dean of Sam. Very well written. Added to my favourite list.
AnickaMarie chapter 11 . 11/14/2006
You are a phenomenal writer!

Your stories are so descriptive. When Lyle and Keth were standing there oozing after they had died I wanted to gag.

The whole time they were battling to get free was an emotional roller coaster. They almost get free, and then they are caught again. You had me completely hooked.

The funeral scene in the Epilouge had me tearing up a little (and I don't usually do that).

I also liked the insight into Dean's thoughts and emotions after "Faith" that we get when he is talking to Alex.

Keep up the good work, but I gotta stop reading these when I need to be getting sleep or doing homework. I keep intending to read a little and then come back later, but that's impossible. :)
Merrie chapter 11 . 10/8/2006
Another awesome fic. Truly. Enough Dean angst to keep even the most twisted fan happy.. ;)... Drama, action, Sam, yeah, it was pretty spectacular. :) Nicely done as always.

-Merrie
AuroraDannon chapter 11 . 10/8/2006
I loved this story!
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