|Reviews for RUMBLE!|
| Gamewizard2008 chapter 1 . 3/9
Ohhhh boy. If Luffy was trouble before, he'll be even more at 4 inches tall. X3
| uNperfectXxXx chapter 36 . 1/19
This was... I can't even discribe what this was. It's really rare to see someone write characters as perfectly in-character as this was and this story has so many layers of meaning and development... Reading this kept me awake all night to finish it and it made me really, really happy and sad at the same time (the thing with Ace at the end just killed me...). You portrayed everything so well and since I've always had a soft spot for Luffy and seeing him break down in the manga and anime always makes me die a little inside some parts of this story had me almost in tears. I'm sure that others have told you before, but this is an incredible masterpiece. Thank you for writing it.
| EmptySurface chapter 5 . 12/16/2013
I don't think Sanji was out of character; he's stopped smoking and that makes people really irritable, I've heard.
The only problem I had with this chapter was when Zoro called Luffy 'buddy'. I just can't picture him doing that, no matter the circumstances.
Other than that, I liked it!
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 36 . 12/12/2013
#breath in relief and some complicated sad feeling
I'm glad Luffy and Zoro finally honest to each other about their feeling...! :)
The kind of High-rated scene on chap 28 was Cool and honestly quite Hot...! XD
Even just description but very Awesome!
(And i did tried search the smutter version on AFFnet but the scene was same...)
Oh Poor Luffy... He saw the mirror and now frustrated after saw Ace's future Fate...! D'X
I was actually actually hoping Ace to appear and see his lil bro Shrunk...! But well... The story still Interesting and Awesome even without him...
Just, too bad he didn't get to see the shrunk (and emotional) version of his cute beloved lil bro...
I feel kinda sorry that Sanji getting yelled by Luffy who was still in heavy emotion after saw what would happen in the future of his brother...!
But that was Great scene as well...
I Love it really much, y'know! :')
Awesome ZoLu fic EVER!
Very Heart-warming and all fluffy adorably cute!
| Ninaloveanime chapter 12 . 12/5/2013
rereading this again, still awesome!
and I spot a mistake, I think:
"Sencho no meidei da!"
-"Oh, nonono! First of all, the captain
didn't ORDER you specifically to take-
that meidei is suppose to be "merei" I think that is how they pronounce
| Guest chapter 36 . 9/13/2013
I love you and I love this story with every bit of my angry crying heart.
| Guest chapter 13 . 9/12/2013
oohhh i love your anfiction and how real the emotions and reactions are!
| tydolt99 chapter 36 . 8/13/2013
Wow I loved this! Amazing story, and it was really amazing. I liked how the relationship went, though at the beginning all the Japanese was kind of annoying. Ima look for the sequal now, would you mind sending me the name if I cant find it? Once again, I really loved this. Arigato
| WhiteSakura59 chapter 36 . 8/8/2013
Loved your story very much, you never rushed their feelings for each other making it a very realistic and believable fanfiction love story. Job well done. :)
| doodlertoday chapter 36 . 7/17/2013
I have to say this is the most fantastic fanfiction i have ever read. Hats off to you my friend-this is incredible! The plot is superb, the character's always in character, your writing style is intriguing...I can't wait to move on to reading the sequel! Dear goodness am I happy I choose to read this during the summer holidays or this would have been the factor to cause me to fail my exams! :D
| zairoon chapter 36 . 7/12/2013
Aaaah that was such a great story! gosh its like almost two in the morning and I have to wake up in like 3 hours to eat before I fast for all day! my god XD... you're gonna kill me with those stories! Great great great fiction, i absolutely loved it. It was amazingly written, detailed, emotional, cute, funny, hot at some point!... Ahhhh... i want more!
| zairoon chapter 28 . 7/12/2013
OOOOOH MY GOD! XDDDD OMG OMG OMG OMGGGGG ...Aaaah I LOVEEEEE This Chapter! lol... I was seeing it coming, seriously... but but but oh my, that was absolutely amazing writing!... I loved it!... I cant wait to see Zoro's thoughts about what he just did to poor chibi luffy! Hahahaha gee that was good! 3
| zairoon chapter 8 . 7/5/2013
Awwww my I love this chapter! It's amazing! I love your fic, no wonder you got an award for it haha... I think I kinda dreamt of it last night O_O lol... *keep reading*... Review later! :)
| Kit Bikyuu The Kitsune chapter 1 . 6/29/2013
| PercyJacksonGurl chapter 5 . 5/29/2013
This chapter was so good! Please don't regret writing this chapter... O lord it made me cry X')