|Reviews for RUMBLE!|
| AZ1087653 chapter 36 . 5/2
This story was all sorts of fun to read. It was a roller-coaster from beginning to end! I didn't even want to work while reading since I wanted to see where you would take the plot. Thank you for such a fun way to spend the time!
| redlipstick77 chapter 36 . 4/22
I FINISHED IT! OMG THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST ZOLU FIC OUT THERE! I TOTES RECOMMEND THIS
| redlipstick77 chapter 8 . 4/21
Too cute! And om that song ughh my cute innocent Luffy
| Shipsgoingdown chapter 35 . 3/20
I love your fic! I have been reading it non stop the last 2 days. I only hope you update sometime soon. Great work!
| FlyingLemonKitteh chapter 36 . 7/6/2014
I love this fic so fucking much I cannot express it. I love you. You made me cry and laugh and even start liking a pairing I hadn't before, which amounts as a pretty exceptional accomplishment. You have won.
| WingsofaBelle chapter 36 . 6/30/2014
amazing! its a really truly great story! emotional trouble, facing being shrunk and zoro and luffy getting closer. That ending though is really interesting. I really want to read the sequel! ace... here's to hoping he doesn't die again. thanks for writing this and sharing it! 3
| BlatantBookworm chapter 5 . 4/24/2014
Ah, brilliant! I love the idea of Sanji giving up smoking and getting angry about the littlest things.
| BlatantBookworm chapter 3 . 4/24/2014
For the record, I am not reviewing as often as I should and it is your fault for crafting such a beautiful story that I can't stop reading for long enough to review properly!
| BlatantBookworm chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Ok. I'm on mobile, so I'm not able to give your story the kind of review it deserves. Despite this, I will try!
Okay. So far it is really cute. The characters are well done, the canon makes sense, and the actual writing (grammar, language, punctuation, etc) is done perfectly.
As of yet, a brilliant story. Can't wait to read more.
| JoojooBrother chapter 36 . 3/26/2014
My God this is amazing why have I never read this before!?
Thank you for the wonderful read, I will definitely be looking at the sequel sometime!
| Gamewizard2008 chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
Ohhhh boy. If Luffy was trouble before, he'll be even more at 4 inches tall. X3
| uNperfectXxXx chapter 36 . 1/19/2014
This was... I can't even discribe what this was. It's really rare to see someone write characters as perfectly in-character as this was and this story has so many layers of meaning and development... Reading this kept me awake all night to finish it and it made me really, really happy and sad at the same time (the thing with Ace at the end just killed me...). You portrayed everything so well and since I've always had a soft spot for Luffy and seeing him break down in the manga and anime always makes me die a little inside some parts of this story had me almost in tears. I'm sure that others have told you before, but this is an incredible masterpiece. Thank you for writing it.
| EmptySurface chapter 5 . 12/16/2013
I don't think Sanji was out of character; he's stopped smoking and that makes people really irritable, I've heard.
The only problem I had with this chapter was when Zoro called Luffy 'buddy'. I just can't picture him doing that, no matter the circumstances.
Other than that, I liked it!
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 36 . 12/12/2013
#breath in relief and some complicated sad feeling
I'm glad Luffy and Zoro finally honest to each other about their feeling...! :)
The kind of High-rated scene on chap 28 was Cool and honestly quite Hot...! XD
Even just description but very Awesome!
(And i did tried search the smutter version on AFFnet but the scene was same...)
Oh Poor Luffy... He saw the mirror and now frustrated after saw Ace's future Fate...! D'X
I was actually actually hoping Ace to appear and see his lil bro Shrunk...! But well... The story still Interesting and Awesome even without him...
Just, too bad he didn't get to see the shrunk (and emotional) version of his cute beloved lil bro...
I feel kinda sorry that Sanji getting yelled by Luffy who was still in heavy emotion after saw what would happen in the future of his brother...!
But that was Great scene as well...
I Love it really much, y'know! :')
Awesome ZoLu fic EVER!
Very Heart-warming and all fluffy adorably cute!
| Ninaloveanime chapter 12 . 12/5/2013
rereading this again, still awesome!
and I spot a mistake, I think:
"Sencho no meidei da!"
-"Oh, nonono! First of all, the captain
didn't ORDER you specifically to take-
that meidei is suppose to be "merei" I think that is how they pronounce