Reviews for End of the Beginning
Crismebella chapter 1 . 6/27/2010
Good, sad and very well written. Thank-you.
tuxie13 chapter 1 . 8/8/2008
this could easily have some chapters afterward showing how reidinger deals after rhyssa dies
5redroses chapter 1 . 4/26/2008
This is the first talent fanfic I've read, beautiful and very sad - why did she have to die?
DementedLeaf chapter 1 . 8/26/2007
You spelt "Amariyah" wrong!

But apart from that, nice.. in a slightly melodramatic way. Keep writing and so on, there still aren't nearly enough Talent fics.

And you do seem to be able to write coherently in English, which is better than the majority of people, it seems. :)
panfriedcatfish chapter 1 . 3/13/2007
So sad. But I liked it anyway. :)
ginalee chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
Good story. Please write more about the talented!
Cesy chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
Well written.
Master Solo chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
Wow that is good. I like it. I think this is the first time I read a Talent fanfic.
Shlane chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Damn, you made me cry.

Talents are my faverate serise, so thankyou for a lovly sad story, hope you do more about the talents just please not this sad again?