|Reviews for Hi Mom|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/15
Very good conflict however I don't think the plot was very accurate according to the movie. You didn't mention anything about the father and I felt like he plays a big role in the movie. And where the fuck did it say anything about cookies in the movie. You should be ashamed. But good job kinda
| odhbfgviul fds chapter 1 . 6/5
this made me cry
| Disneyfangirl774 chapter 1 . 1/9
Great story. If only Chicken Little's mother were here to see his achievements. She would have been very proud! Luckily, she was already watching her only son and husband from above.
| I Heart Abby and Disney chapter 1 . 9/18/2016
Great I love that how you develop chicken little's relationship with his mum
| SawuScimitar74 chapter 1 . 4/1/2016
Great job! I really like how dramatic and touching this story is. I'm glad that Chicken Little finally got the chance to visit his mother's grave, and tell her how everything has been since her passing.
This was a very touching chat with her. I'm happy that Chicken Little never forgot about her, and that he said she will always be remembered. That made me want to cry. Literally the tears nearly came out of my eyes.
You did a fine job on this! Please keep it up! :)
| Person chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
That was so sweet. It made me cry a little. Good work! I think I should start writing my own.
| ASianSuccessor2012 chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
I was looking through the fanfictions of this category, then I ran into this and read it. Now I just have to say...Wow...this story is incredibly touching. One of the few stories I've read that didn't cease to pull on my heartstrings. Your story was quite captivating, it kept me reading and wanting to see more! Chicken Little and Abby are just so in character, and you did such a wonderful job at that. While I was reading this story, even if it's been a long time since you wrote this, I couldn't help but to think about my 34 year oldcousin who I just recently lost two weeks ago. I was crying inside as I was thinking abour her while I was reading, and how much more she could have lived for and how caring she always had been, just as I'm sure Chicken Little's Mom was. :') I have no words right now, except to say that your story is a winner, and your writing style is simply amazing...congratulations. Your story is one of the best I've ever read.
| Dan chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Good Job! What books have you published?
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
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| I am a 2012 reviewer chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
| AnthonyAngrywolf chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
chicken little sure misses his mother...
| teacupz chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
it was pretty sad and I thought that you captured it right on spot. drama was good but I guess family 'might' be suiter for the genre instead of romance...? well, only my opinion. -'
this is the first Chicken Little fic that I read. and, I get a bit confused with the nickname 'CL' of Chicken Little in the beggining. is the fandom used that nickname pretty often? :) but I guess, you should write his full name instead on the description... (sorry if I am wrong, T_T)
great emotional sceneries. the part when Abby brought Chicken Little a cake was awesome. although I think some of Chicken Little's quote will give more sad effects if there are a few sobs or if they are split into two parts and so...
thanks for the amazing read that I had. keep writing!
| 27's Fury chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
aww,so sad and yet so great! hope to read more from you!
| skater rootbeer taco soda chapter 1 . 9/9/2008
that was so sad!
| Beloved Morning Star chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
That was really good.