Reviews for Surprise and Lies
the1980skunoichi chapter 6 . 5/16/2009
this was such a great story! MAKE ANOTHER ONE!

Luved it!
WhiteTigerLilly chapter 2 . 6/24/2008
ok think of it as telling it as its already happened instead of trying to tell it as its happening.

I'm sorry i used to be a newsletter editor. spelling and grammar i can ignore but format and view get me.
WhiteTigerLilly chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
GREAT! but... your format kills T.T

For example, instead of...

"Miroku! Stop it!"Sango warns as she blushes a deep red.

you should have written...

"Miroku! Stop it!" Sango warned, blushing a deep red.

You got the ideas but you gotta work on your format kid!

PS Jesus rulz
DemonSlayingChick chapter 6 . 4/10/2008
I loved all of it except for when Inuyasha and Kagome died. I dont think that fit in veary well.

-Demon Slaying Chick-
InuFan07 chapter 6 . 11/27/2007
I think it could have been more detailed too, but overall it was really good:)
Random Dice chapter 6 . 1/29/2007
this is so sad :-(
ZukoxKatara4ever chapter 3 . 11/12/2006
Poor Sango
Kagome Lovely chapter 6 . 10/21/2006
Aw! You killed InuYasha Shippo and Kagome! How could you! lol. It was both happy and sad. I'm indiffrent. It is still good :D
I'm-So-Tape chapter 6 . 6/12/2006
awsome story! :)
Adana fukettei chapter 6 . 3/28/2006
3... hm.. quite interesting... I liked it.. it had that origonal twist in it...It would have been nice if it was longer and a bit more detailed... I'm not saying it is bad.. in fact.. it was really good... I will read any of your future stories...try and stay origonal n_n...

Have Fun Writing! 3

~V-fox
Ashuri chapter 6 . 3/27/2006
i liked it alot but you should have made the seans longer. you did expeshely good constering you are only 13.-it you do not agree then e-mail me. i love sangoxmiroku fics. (we have alot in comen.)
chastity chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
your story is really good i would love to read the rest of it!
My House Of Cards chapter 6 . 3/27/2006
Aw...
Aiko Takumi chapter 6 . 3/26/2006
Woah.. That ended quite fast...

i like your plot anyway. Got me going at the part with Naraku though...

Good Job

~NkA
half-breed389 chapter 6 . 3/25/2006
I kinda like this story. It's not very long, or have much of a plot, but its nice for just a quick read when your looking for something to do. Odd choice of name, Laken. Is that an actual traditional Japanese name or did you just make it up?
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