Reviews for Maternal Instinct
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
GODNESS! I felt like I very NEED sequel right NOW! DDX
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
I like how you write Yukiko and Yusaku, I really wish that more people would write about Yukiko. Sorry I'm bad at reviews. :(
CressidaRene chapter 1 . 2/20/2013
Such a great one-shot, and it's nice to see a story showing that Yukiko Kudo at least has a strong parental instinct! Since Aoyama's details on Shinichi's parents was sketchy at best in the beginning of his story, this is a nice piece that fills in the gaps, and helps to add some humanity to Yukiko and Yuusaku.

I would love to see you write a companion piece to this story, one that covers the events from after Conan realizes his kidnappers were actually his parents, up until the point where Mrs. Edogawa returned her son to the Mouris' home. Did Yukiko spend some time squeezing her regressed son half to death, turning back the clock to when he was little, and she could dote on him? Did Shinichi's parents give him a tongue-lashing for not keeping them up-to-date with what had happened to him? Did Yuusaku drive him nuts berating his mistake for what led to his predicament, or did Yukiko spend the time mothering him, and telling him stories of when he was little the first time around? Maybe they made Shinichi pay a price for staying in Japan, like making him go sit for a new family portrait, or letting them take him to the zoo, in full little-boy mode, riding on his dad's shoulders, holding his mother's hands while she got him an ice cream. Whatever would mortify the already-pissed shrunken teenager, there are a lot of fun possibilities there!
shadowphantomness chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
... Why did I not review this story before? I'm sorry! I really like the idea of Yukiko having a maternal instinct. I am certain that despite her sometimes ditzy exterior and Yuusaku's laziness, both of them care very deeply for Shinichi. And yes, I'm surprised she was patient enough to wait several weeks before flying to Japan, but Conan wouldn't be as much fun otherwise, ne?

You are the most prolific Detective Conan writer I've seen! I am very slowly reading my way through your plethora of work, though I usually leave anonymous reviews.

Cheers,

Phantomness
Kaida-14Kage chapter 1 . 10/2/2011
How sweet family moment. And completly conan worthy. This probaly is what happened-and how ill think of it from now on.
catgirld86 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
hi. loved this! it was cool how you played on Yukiko's maternal instincts! very cute. - 0
topaz-tantei chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
Yes! Yukiko love! :o) There aren't many fics quite like this... actually, I don't think I've ever seen a fic about what happened right before the first manga appearance of the Kudou parents...

Nicely done!

topaz-tantei
DetectiveConanFan13 chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
This was cool! They never really said anything canon wise about this and so I was pleasantly surprised that you had written this. It was quite good.

J. DCF
Name-Changing Beast chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
I've always wanted to know how Shin'ichi's parents found out. Now I know! Yay!
PlutoAn chapter 1 . 6/30/2006
That was a really good chapter! Update soon!XP
Seductive Venus chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
it's an interesting premise. you captured her maternal instincts very well! Hmm, you're a very good writer! _ I'd love to see what's next! Keep on writing! *cheers*
Ami the Elemental Sorceress chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
wow!
Moonlight The Legendary Star chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
*sob*what happened to Shin-chan?You got me panic what happenesn next?IT's so soon

moonlight
Yue Ryong - Shadowborne chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
Not bad. An enjoyable little read for a half-hour.
RanMouri82 chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
This seems accurate enough, though their return to Japan didn't seem to be prompted by anything; but the interaction with Yukiko and her Irate Husband was priceless. You especially kept Yuusaku in character, eagerly ditching his manuscripts once again! Sweet, funny story . . . and a nice look at some characters we usually don't get to see. Keep writing!
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