|Reviews for Up in Smoke|
| ANONYMOUS chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
THIS IS SAD BUT GOOD!(:(:(:
| stef chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
very good. very cute. but in one part confusing because i cant tell whos talking. right from whre either fiona or quigley says you know im not very nice but i figured that fiona said that. but it was veryy cutee. i love and am a sucker for quiglet. great job. :]] -stef
| coolmarauders chapter 1 . 4/9/2006
I really liked this. I thought it was great; it conveyed so much feeling without over-writing, If you know what I mean.
But I found two very small spelling mistakes. One: you wrote Brimy instead of Briny beach. Two: You wrote Baudelairs instead of Baudelaires! oops!
This was great!
| Bellatree chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
It was simple, and short, but I liked it.
*adds to favorites*
Uh-oh, my review is going up in smok-e-
| AntisocialButterfly13 chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
Aw! Cute Maya. Finally "clean your room"? *wink wink*