Reviews for biscuit
XxxDeathStarxxX chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Nice little almost drabble! Only 6 words over. XD Its descriptive and though it's short it has a whole lot of meaning in it.

-DeathStar
12q chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Oh gosh. Beautiful and very poignant. *goes bawl some more*
poison-maestro chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
woah...um okay?
Shadow chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
This story's kinda short. But from what I've read, it's a much different take on the whole AxelXRoxas thing and I respect that!
Starlight's Delight chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
Well written but enigmatic.

As for the title, it's Ms. Block and her Mab, right?

The other boys may be biscuits, but Axel and Roxas are definitely eclaires.
SnoOza chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
BRILLIANT. Economical, engaging, and develops the theme tightly without overindulging or being too scant. (oh gosh, I sound like I'm marking a school essay. x_X)
Butterfly-Potpourri chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
Yay! Lovely little Akuroku here. Although...I don't really like uke Axel vs. uke Roxas. Roxas just seems to scream "rape me up the ass plskthx! Shouta bait I are! LAWLZ!" Or maybe it's just me...

Good fic though! n-n
Starr Bryte chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Your fanfictions don't pull any punches do they? Ouch! That hurts... Makes me wanna give Axel a hug even more now! Wow...
Snakefire chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
Nice.
Ryfee chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
nice akuroku

akuroku rawks the hell yeah-hh

&& secks rawks teh sox too,

srsly.

xDD

Plz write more akuroku yeah?

fel
freakenout chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
aww. so ;_; . no hearts. o well ill pretend they do n_n.
merines chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Emo!Roxas strikes again. XDD -lurves Emo!Roxas-

It's so sad, though. -snugs- There there, you'll feel.
lighter-kun chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
wow O that was...intense :D and very well written! i never really thought of roxas as ...seme. XD lolz.
TheGadgetFish chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
Aww, so sad :(

I love your characterization
Wolfiee chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
Awesome, great drabble and its really like how they would feel, awesome ICness. I hope you write something else soon. RoxasxAxel rocks.
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