|Reviews for biscuit|
| XxxDeathStarxxX chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
Nice little almost drabble! Only 6 words over. XD Its descriptive and though it's short it has a whole lot of meaning in it.
| 12q chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
Oh gosh. Beautiful and very poignant. *goes bawl some more*
| poison-maestro chapter 1 . 8/9/2008
| Shadow chapter 1 . 8/31/2007
This story's kinda short. But from what I've read, it's a much different take on the whole AxelXRoxas thing and I respect that!
| Starlight's Delight chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
Well written but enigmatic.
As for the title, it's Ms. Block and her Mab, right?
The other boys may be biscuits, but Axel and Roxas are definitely eclaires.
| SnoOza chapter 1 . 9/4/2006
BRILLIANT. Economical, engaging, and develops the theme tightly without overindulging or being too scant. (oh gosh, I sound like I'm marking a school essay. x_X)
| Butterfly-Potpourri chapter 1 . 7/30/2006
Yay! Lovely little Akuroku here. Although...I don't really like uke Axel vs. uke Roxas. Roxas just seems to scream "rape me up the ass plskthx! Shouta bait I are! LAWLZ!" Or maybe it's just me...
Good fic though! n-n
| Starr Bryte chapter 1 . 7/22/2006
Your fanfictions don't pull any punches do they? Ouch! That hurts... Makes me wanna give Axel a hug even more now! Wow...
| Snakefire chapter 1 . 5/26/2006
| Ryfee chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
akuroku rawks the hell yeah-hh
&& secks rawks teh sox too,
Plz write more akuroku yeah?
| freakenout chapter 1 . 4/16/2006
aww. so ;_; . no hearts. o well ill pretend they do n_n.
| merines chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Emo!Roxas strikes again. XDD -lurves Emo!Roxas-
It's so sad, though. -snugs- There there, you'll feel.
| lighter-kun chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
wow O that was...intense :D and very well written! i never really thought of roxas as ...seme. XD lolz.
| TheGadgetFish chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
Aww, so sad :(
I love your characterization
| Wolfiee chapter 1 . 3/9/2006
Awesome, great drabble and its really like how they would feel, awesome ICness. I hope you write something else soon. RoxasxAxel rocks.