Reviews for Meeting Again
Tinted Red chapter 6 . 11/3/2006
This story looks like it was written by a four year old. No description whatsoever. Descripbe their surroundings and what's going on around them. There should be paragraphs! Hove you heard of them? You have lines as if this where a script (Story not script please!) If you write like this, FanFiction isn't the place for you.
EgYpTiAnAnUbItE chapter 2 . 3/10/2006
It's pretty vague, I can't really tell whats going on around. Try describing the surroundings etc. Other than that, it isn't all too bad.
epalladino chapter 2 . 3/10/2006
Hi, this is kind of cute. Thanks for posting and I'll look forward to more. Never knew Abe quite had this kind of sense of humor, but it works. Beth Palladino