|Reviews for A message from Action Man|
| Blackrose715378 chapter 6 . 9/26/2004
Just a thought, but writing in present tense isn't always the greatest thing for a story, it makes it seem too hectic. Maybe try something in past tense? Just my opinion, you don't have to listen to it.
| Sonar chapter 1 . 11/24/2002
This is a sad story
| Zeta1 chapter 6 . 12/15/2001
Yes, Sonar, it did.
| Sonar chapter 6 . 10/17/2001
| Dizzy2 chapter 5 . 7/6/2001
ACK! It's really short. But cool, I like how you put Alex and Tempest in that kinda situation. I can't to see what happens next.
| Sonar chapter 3 . 6/22/2001
Tempest: Let me go!
Alex: You don't want to fall to your doom.
| Dizzy2 chapter 3 . 6/22/2001
| Covin chapter 1 . 5/16/2001
Hmm...a little strange but hey, what can i say? You're cool and i'll wait for chapter 2-if you make one.
| Lasaravis chapter 1 . 5/15/2001
May I ask where this is going?
| Fidget chapter 1 . 5/14/2001
What the heck? It's cool, but I don't get where you got it. Hmm.