"you are her heart, bastard"

-my favorite line

- this fic was short, yet powerful enough...

Keep on writing!

Your imagination is so very powerful. I loved the story about the woman with the unrequited love. It moved me. Extremely well written.

That story was wonderful.

Wow. x)

i cried when the line "you ARE her heart, bastard" came up. you're one of those writers that can write SasuSaku fics that can actually clench my heart. wonderful story. loved it very much and it's going to my favourites (:

keep writing!

Okay, you just left me speechless here. Uh, this was simply sweet, angsty and very well-written. I liked Naruto's line near the end. It's a dramatic part for me.

-Vanity-chan

that was really touching i like it alot

I wish I could give you a detailed review, because this oneshot really deserves it, but this piece was so incredibly depressing and romantic, that I'm at a loss for words. So, all I can say is that this was a brilliant piece, and that you did a really great job.

brownie points to your story! i love this story, man...keep writing

I asolutely loved this! It's this sort of SasuSaku that makes me love the pairing! Kudos to you for your amazing talent!

Exceptionally clever and well-written. Love it. I read Erebus and loved your whole flow of the story too.

Do write more SasuSaku soon :D

This is one of the most beautiful Sakura/Sasuke stories published on this site. After I finished reading this, I was just jumbled with with a slur of emotions: sadness, happiness, nostalgia, regret, and all sorts of wonderful.

I think you've gotten the concept of Sakura's love for Sasuke captured beautifully here. You also put a real emphasis to Sasuke's muddled feelings for Sakura. Sasuke's a bit of a child; un-clear about what exactly it is he feels for Sakura, kind of warm but kind of cold. Your writing is just comforting to read.

Uhm, Naruto's role was also wonderful in this piece. And I really love the whole linear theme of Sakura's heart being Sasuke's.

I'm pretty in with this right now. :)

I'm still crying. That fanfic was so beautiful-everything was so wellwritten, every scene. This is probably, undoubtedly one of the best romance fanfics I've ever read. I'm definitely faving it.

woot, i'm crying, it was really gud... o, and k, i'm really dumb so u'll have to explain this to me... is she alive or were those like her last words?

- Sam xoxo

That was so brilliant.

I mean, the writing in itself could make even the toughest heart sniffle, and I swear that you could have easily torn a page from the Naruto book.

It was a great piece of writing, and I'll definetly be watching.