|Reviews for When Our Minds Betray Us|
| lotchness chapter 15 . 9/17/2010
Typing on cell phone's such a bitch! My poor thumb...
| lotchness chapter 14 . 9/17/2010
I am so sure you are quite irritated with my reviews by now but in a benevolant tolerant way...lol
| lotchness chapter 13 . 9/17/2010
| lotchness chapter 12 . 9/17/2010
Aargh...stupid sites not allowing me to review all the chapters...grrr...
| lotchness chapter 11 . 9/17/2010
Btw, just wondering...how come you stopped posting here?
| lotchness chapter 10 . 9/17/2010
What? I warned you I'm not big on constructive criticism...but I'm compelled cuz it's just that good. Really.
| lotchness chapter 9 . 9/17/2010
Finally? Hell yeah!
| lotchness chapter 8 . 9/17/2010
Wow, more 23 chapters to review... This was one Tolkeinesque epic!
| lotchness chapter 7 . 9/17/2010
Honey, you don't need to beg, your writing clearly deserves more than just reviews anyway.
| lotchness chapter 6 . 9/17/2010
I bet this is THE review that you didn't like.
| lotchness chapter 5 . 9/17/2010
| lotchness chapter 4 . 9/17/2010
That Jess' grave scene almost had me in tears.
| lotchness chapter 3 . 9/17/2010
Good one. Bit on the lengthier side maybe
| lotchness chapter 2 . 9/17/2010
I loved Rebecca's character. But maybe you could have put a little bit more intensity in Zach's, the guys a pussy.
| lotchness chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Hey! Just wanted to tell you...AMAZING! Seriously. I read this way back but I was a seriously reluctant reviewer then. I am a new person now lol!
So anyway, loved it and wanted you to know that you are a very talented writer. You should really write more. And I just wanna show my appreciation by increasing the number of reviews ... But unfortunately I suck at making good observations and then commenting on them. So just forgive my crap reviews(it's the sentiment behind them that really matters, right? Ha ha)