|Reviews for Change of Heart|
| ultragreenyellow56 chapter 36 . 7/30
Welp... Bowser's rash thinking got them in a hard spot
| ultragreenyellow56 chapter 31 . 7/30
OK... so 2 chapter long Climax for Mario and Luigi's adventure compared to 5 the chapter long long Climax for Bowser and Peach
That's fine though one tiny complaint I have for this chapter is that Somber and slightly Cheerful atmosphere that was with Bowser and Peach highly contrasted the Ominous and Foreboding atmosphere of the situation in Mario and Luigi's adventure right now
| ultragreenyellow56 chapter 30 . 7/30
It seems those gems are very sensitive to light as it seems that it triggered some sort of reaction from what I could tell...
Anyways this chapter has to be the Climax for Mario's adventure rather then the Climax for Bowser and Peach, you clearly discussed that the Climax for them was the ball
| ultragreenyellow56 chapter 29 . 7/30
Huh, I really liked this chapter, it had a lot of elements working perfectly together
great job Razzi
| Guest chapter 52 . 7/29
I have just read the entire thing yes, 52 chapters and honestly it has been onr of the best things I have read I really really loved this
| ultragreenyellow56 chapter 26 . 7/29
Whoa.. did Daisy just experience a Psychic Dream or something?..
| ultragreenyellow56 chapter 23 . 7/29
Cute, though Ludwig used a bunch of words I never heard of before such as ketch and madolade... so I opened a tab so I could look them up so I didn't get lost
| ultragreenyellow56 chapter 16 . 7/23
Good chapter, though Makari changed thier username, i'm not getting results...
| ultragreenyellow56 chapter 9 . 7/7
To be honest how I would of explained Bowser's situation to Peach would be this "i know you not fond of Bowser but even he has feelings... he just want's you to be happy, he has your best interests in mind and even he can get lonely... he lacks friends...
I don't blame him for being a bit grumpy, upset and troubled over this... most people ether fear him or only respect him due to him being Royalty..." *I would likely be cut off*
"he just is used to only being feared or treated as royalty which is why he is like he is today... Give him a chance to finally have a friend... your the only hope he has left for friendship"
| Topsyturvy10 chapter 52 . 5/21
Hi! I came back to read this story about two and a half years after i initally read it, and Miss Razzi, I am in LOVE. It's honestly the best story I've ever read, and the longest as well- too bad it can't count towards my word count thing i have at school :P
But seriously. All the characters are so well written, nothing is forced and none of the characters are protrayed in an overly negative light. Each character has their own story, and every reader has probably found someone they can relate too- just like how i discovered my inner musician through Ludwig. The plot is well written too, it honestly feels like a movie script or something, you're an incredible writer Razzy, I love CoH. I'm not asking for any sequels, and I know there probably won't be, but I wouldn't say no if you offered any :P
Basically, you've done a great job and I've said exactly what everyone else has.
| Yababab chapter 35 . 4/14
So where can i find mariosonic's one shot? Ive tried looking for it. Otherwise the story is brilliant.
| Guard chapter 32 . 2/24
Queen Peach, naf said
| PianoKing03 chapter 52 . 12/22/2016
Hmm... I give it "The Three Ms"; Magnificent, Marvelous and Melodius! I do believe this is the greatest work of fan-based literature I've read in a long while, perhaps as of ever! Which is definitely saying something, for I've read nearly every Mario FanFic ever written. Your penmanship is incredible, and I positively adore the way you twisted the romance into existence. I very much hope that I will be able to find another FanFic as incredible as yours, which, however, is rather unlikely. I admire this work and congratulate you personally. Many thanks for this story, and a Merry Christmas to all.
| GreyscaleWriter chapter 45 . 2/12/2016
"my warts are all...elsewhere" has to be the most disgusting flirt line ive ever read
| Guest chapter 24 . 11/3/2015
I loved the Beauty and The Beast reference here! Combine my favorite movie and game together awesome chapter!