Reviews for A Price to Pay
ahans1b chapter 6 . 5/9/2017
Ohhh...please give me the lemon link! This story is hot.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2017
This is the first fanfic I have read that actually has good writing. I'm so happy! I'm loving this story so far! Thanks for taking the time to concentrate and write well! Bravo!
Sena Yashiro chapter 6 . 4/12/2017
The Sasuke is so much into his character, but I can not imagine Naruto would be so horrible in this story, his character is far off the truth. I mean alright he had been through a lot, A LOT I mean, but his character wasn't anything like most human, he was like a make believe character. Too perfect for any person in this world, but I can not relate his character in this story anything like the canon. I'm sorry, but your story is emotional as it could get, even though there is so much sexual content, it wasn't expressed sexually but emotionally. I love it, thank you for making this story.
jj chapter 6 . 11/14/2016
buttercup chapter 2 . 11/5/2016
OH dear!
buttercup chapter 1 . 11/5/2016
YaoiHimeSama chapter 6 . 5/19/2016
I love the story! Especially the last chapter ;) lol
what chapter 3 . 4/10/2015
Naruto is such a whiny OOC little bitch in this fic.
Sakura cheats on Sasuke but Naruto threatens to kill Sasuke because of . . .
what exactly?
He never hit her and the most he did was neglect her so was the threat really needed?
Why bring Sasuke back to his home if he was going to continue being a dick?
Like. . .it is irritating and confusing to see Naruto bring all of Sasuke's stuff back to his own apartment . . . then proceed to bitch at him for how horrible of a person Sasuke apparently is?
Like Naruto wasn't a total sleeze ball for agreeing to Sasuke's bet just so he could have Sakura like she was some kind of possession to be owned and not a human being with no say in the matter.
meh, I'll find something else to read where Naruto isn't so OOC that he wished his own best friend (whom he fought for in the majority of the show) gone or still in the clutches of a pale pedophile
ViolettAvox chapter 3 . 12/3/2014
I can't find the link you are speaking if and I really want to read the lemon D: chapter 6 . 11/18/2014
Wonderful. I really loved this. I love a Sasuke written like this- constantly plagued by his inner wars of emotion. And it's only Naruto that ever see them in him, and that understands them. It all came to a peak in the last chapter. I LOVED Sasuke's confession scene. The sheer amount of emotion you managed to embody in him was simply amazing.
This was truly wonderful, and I enjoyed it to the very last word. The only thing I'll suggest is a sequel, if you haven't already looked into one. Maybe have them adopt the gennin? It'd be a rly cute family :) Thank you for this! Well done.
Parnita chapter 6 . 11/4/2014
Wow, this story was very intense & gripping...
I loved it... But I wish the lemon was included..
To read it on another site is 'so troublesome'
But its quite good even without it!
cocainencaviar chapter 6 . 12/5/2013
Wow. This was such an intense fic. The emotions in this are so deep and so raw. Even though I disliked this Sasuke, I couldn't help but feel he was right in character. In other fics he tends to get fluffed up abit, but we all know the real Sasuke is a fucked up bastard and you painted that well. It was happy ending in its own messed up way and I loved the whole story. Great job :)
GoTrinba chapter 6 . 9/27/2013
Such a heart-wrenching story! Absolutely fabulous! I'm in love with the extreme angst of the beginning. Sasuke's love for Naruto is so painful. He loves him so much, he could go as far as to trick him and risk being hated for life, to have a single night of indulgence. I loved Naruto's point of view, how repulsed he felt at first, and I loved seeing the switch in him. I mean, he was deeply in love with Sakura, so much so that he did those things without having any feelings for Sasuke. If Sasuke had never made him do that, who knows if they would have ever gotten together. Risky move on Sasuke's part but it worked! I think that writing in naruto's pov was a good idea, cause Sasuke must be consumed with such obsessive feelings, I feel his pov would be extremely suffocating lmao I loved the scenes where he would get rejected, so painful I could cry if I had it in me lol You write angst so deliciously. I was so sad cause I thought I couldn't find your lemoney chapter anywhere, there was no link I could find on your profile and I checked aff and mediaminer. But then I decided to try aarin and found it! Anyways, this story is definitely one of my top favorite stories of all times. I have a lot, but it's really rare nowadays to find something that's awesomely written that catches my interest and that I actually fall in love with. Thanks for writing this awesome story!
ReeveRegala chapter 6 . 8/12/2013
I really love the plotline.. So hoot..!
DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 5 . 6/30/2013
hot hot hotttttt
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