Reviews for Corellia Twirl
machievelli chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Supposed to have been posted 9 September 2011, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. but I had problems with my computer, and flaked on attaching these reviews to the original story threads for the last year. Everyone say; 'Mach is a flake, Mach is a yo-yo'. Better yet (Waves hand) 'Mach is trying, but he's still a flake'.

Based on the Blue Side of the Force: There are ways to learn how to be graceful

The piece shows us another side of the Corellans and especially the one thing used oddly enough by both sports teams and firemen, the use of dance to teach proper motion to the practitioners.
dong ma chapter 1 . 4/5/2006
I love backstory. It's so interesting. Ans this is sweet. It made me giggle. As always, your work rocks.