|Reviews for Much Ado About Nothing|
| Aelaer chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Oh my lord! This was so simple, yet so *brilliant*. Two normal, illiterate guards just having a conversation... brilliance! It's simple one shots like these that really stand out! And also, do not apologize for their illiteracy; it's called dialect, and makes the story more realistic... or more humorous!
Two small critiques, though. I think 'sicko' is a slang word, thus did not exist. And same with drugs... I do not think that there really are drugs that make you 'high', as in modern day ecstasy or LCD... yes, there are medical herbs/drugs, but not drugs such as they were talking about.
But as this is a humor fic, and you made me crack up, I'll let those pass ;)
This is going on my favorites! A good place to go when I need some laughs.
| Shandris chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Nice! I liked especially the end: "While the guards launched into another argument, two lone figures stood on the walls of the City, their hair streaming out into the mingling air." Can we count on sequel? ;)
| Winter Bean chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
i love it love it love it love it please please please write more