Reviews for The kiss
physcobarbie chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
Is this a fab/auto doc? Gee I hope so
Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2010 this it?
noraily chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Short for sure, but so completely funny ! You cracked me up XD !
JTSplash chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
I cracked up laughing! This is class!
TrialLunatic chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Hmm... I'm gonna have to argue that this would not have been possible to write if there wasn't such a heavy background story to refer to. And in my opinion, no story could be told under 200 characters and in two sentences unless it was overly simplistic and devoid of 'dynamic' (not the word i want to use but i can't find the right one for now) content matter: i.e. He was born and grew up. Then he died an old man.

Although I did enjoy the two-liner quite a bit, I'd like to challenge you to a real good short story in 10 sentences or less. If you're up to it.
Xebe chapter 1 . 5/21/2006
Great short, couldn;t stop laughing. Short but sweet. Thanks
Vix075 chapter 1 . 5/9/2006
HAHAHA! I knew what you were talking about immediately. Although I really can't agree with you about a story only being two sentences, it was good nonetheless. I like how mildly it was done; made it all the more funny.
fledge chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Pretty good fun, and leverly done with this handful of words...
csigeeksmeetsharrypottergeeks chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
really good but a little short you should write a longer fanfic cause i'm tired of all these joxer centered ones where they're the only ones that update