Reviews for A Bit of Advice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Although the formatting is terrible, this was a very enjoyable story. I really enjoyed the way different characters told tales from the past and brought new life to the characters. Thanks for taking the time to write and share this |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was a work of art. Humiliating Darcy and Bingley in such a myriad of ways! |
![]() ![]() Get a mistressvDarcy you r from 1800. U r acting like a doormat |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a fun story. I loved the personality you gave them and your wiring style is very pleasing. Thanks a lot for the reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I can sense it. Darcy doesn’t have any answers either HAHAHA. “ever-more-experienced at everything brother-figure” YOU’LL BE EATING YOUR WORDS, CHARLES Dang, Darcy reminds me so much of my brother. Interrupting so as not to waste time? Scale of impatience? Wall of impassivity? Check, check, and check. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for sharing your story. I enjoyed the banter you created between many of the characters, giving them all a little greater depth. I look forward to reading more stories from you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No tenía idea que era el kama sutra jajajaj el capítulo se me hizo triste xd |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Mr. Darcy did not want to know what was potentially pleasing to Elizabeth Bennet. He did want to know what Louisa Hurst found pleasing" whaaaaat? I know my english is not the best but... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Que ganas de Darcy de interrumpir jajajaja |
![]() ![]() ![]() No es crítica, pero no sé a cuántas personas realmente le guste -o interese- saber con cuántas mujeres/hombres su pareja estuvo antes que se conocieran. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Igual se me hace algo extraño lo que pide Charles jajaja |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story that I just came across and is was very entertaining! I enjoy the personalities you have given to our usual suspectsBingley feels fairly naive and Darcy has found a new layer of humour. I laughed a lot in comparison to other P&P FF. and i think you have some clever puns (for example Mr Bennett talking about what husband he anticipates for his remaining daughters given the trend!). Thank you so much. I will start reading the rest of your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Delightful, thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very obscure 'air-clearing' |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fascinating start |