Reviews for Hot Water
Harivardi fangirl chapter 1 . 9/3/2017
Wow! I'm speechless. You captured everything beautifully, and English isn't my first language too but you're really good at it! I can see the scene in my mind..
Lady Elvira chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
Wonderfully written! Very moving, totally in character and oh-so adorable. The rather "strange" parts in particular - they seemed completely natural and like they should have happened no other way but just like that. I really enjoyed reading this one - the narrative style you've picked here was rather unusual thus even more appealing. Great to see that you've put so much effort in to try and find a very inventive, unique way of telling this little One-Shot!

Kohai Aburame chapter 1 . 6/2/2015
That was adorable! Such a cute story.
Blondynka chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
Quite an idea you've got :D enjoyed this fic greatly! It's wonderful :)
emichii chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
are you sure english is your second language? because that was really written flawlessly!

i love how you captured them perfectly, the way you hint the moments between them, and the ending sentence. really, really well-written, good job! :)
xnafraxd chapter 1 . 4/22/2009
WOW! They took a bath together! *squirm* ek! hOW CUTE!. short yet enjoyable! :D
Wiked Witch chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
So very cute and so very well written.
IllaSc chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
This is beautiful! Despite the small bit of awkwardness, since English is your second language, the heart of this fic (and the heart of Roy and Riza's relationship) really came through with every sentence. Very well done, and gorgeous analogies with the heaviness.
Kurissyma san Tybalt chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
Aww! I just love the sort of tired and peaceful feeling this fic generates. It's like, Roy and Riza are so comfortable with each other. They sort of need this time alone- ridding each other of their sins and grievances. I really loved it. Great job! P

Oblivioneclipse chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
I love the quality of your writing. All of your Royai fics are exceptionally good!

"His fingers are tangled in her hair, and he feels how the weight is finally lifting off his shoulders, how it’s becoming easier to breathe as the burden leaves his chest."
qian chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Very nice. I love the subtlety you achieved with this fic. Keep it up! I would love to see more RoyAi fics from you.
Nana chapter 1 . 7/9/2006

So sweet!

I loved it.
SAILORMERCY chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
The Tiramisu Of Impending Doom chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
Ah, this is really beautiful. Subtle and kinda sexy, but not tasteless, and it seems to be pretty in-character. These two are hard to characterize, so I think you did pretty well. And as for grammar and spelling mistakes, I didn't see any, but then I'm quite taken by the little story. Thank you for doing this couple justice.
MoonStarDutchess chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
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