|Reviews for I'm a Ninja from the Village Hidden in the Clouds|
| Daisy-023 chapter 3 . 8/15/2015
| Daisy-023 chapter 4 . 8/14/2015
Great work so far, even if your grammar does need a a little work. I think a good idea for the third round would be to have it Hinata versus Neji and have a point in the fight where he throws a kunai/shuriken and cuts her blindfold, forcing her to reveal her Byakugan. It would be interesting to see not only Neji's reaction, but also Hiashi's. Maybe they take the whole "the Byakugan is the property of our clan" stance, thus pissing off Kumo and making Hinata lash out in self defense.
You don't have to do this, it's just my suggestion, but I think it's worth considering, don't you?
| Nemo chapter 4 . 11/8/2014
Please please please do NaruHina! I beg you! On tje other hand, great story so far, I kinda qant how :3.
| Confused chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Am I the only one who got here from Tara Gilesbie's account? (A.K.A XXXbloodywrists666XXX).
| M chapter 3 . 4/22/2012
GAAHINA 4EVER! But SasuHina works too.
| Jiin-Chan chapter 4 . 11/27/2011
Interresting I must say!'
Writing style is good. And I really like the plot!
Mou, wish you'll make it longer!
Anyways good job on the chap. Looking forward to more!
Please update soon!
| RoyalPrincessHinataHyuga chapter 4 . 7/26/2011
cool i like this story.i hope Hianta finds who she really is its your story it will be great wither way. Dplease update when you get the chance too please.
| 1111010101010101010delete10100 chapter 4 . 4/22/2011
this story is awesome! cant waite for your next update!
| crimsonblade chapter 4 . 3/30/2011
it has been a few years i hope you take it up again its really good :)
| Sairey13 chapter 4 . 6/11/2010
I can't wait 4 the next part 2 come,Does that mean Hizashi isn't dead? And when will Hiashi and Neji see Hinata? Can't wait for the next part!
| Snowlily246 chapter 4 . 5/16/2010
| Rin Uzamaki chapter 4 . 11/9/2009
That kunai better be in your eye, it's been 2 years since you last updated. Please update soon, with a large chapter please. I want to see who it is. Is it the sand sibs?(DU-DU-DUN)Anyway original story, update soon, yada yada. (UPDATE! or else you wil wake up with kisame looming over :D)
| DELETE.THIS.ACOUNT.PLEASE chapter 4 . 4/25/2009
great chapter! yami is so cool! jaja and so is hinata and yoko! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| DELETE.THIS.ACOUNT.PLEASE chapter 3 . 4/25/2009
jaja awsome chapter! i really like you original characters! yami is so funny... becuase... well i dont know why! and yoko is very cute! i would say that i would like sasuhina!
| anime-freak chapter 4 . 4/25/2008
i love this story so much! please update soon!