Reviews for My One and Only
Guest chapter 31 . 1/15
Good story, although it leans too heavily on Hermione continually blaming herself for everything that went wrong, thinking everyone hated her, etc. That story device works once but then gets tiring.
uwuwuwuwu chapter 31 . 11/19/2020
Clinio chapter 31 . 11/19/2020
Congratulations. It's a very good job that has the virtue of improving as it goes. It is true that the origin is taken "by the hair", but it is a valid writer's license that gives place to a magnificent fic. Thank you very much.
Hermione Granger chapter 3 . 7/29/2020
Where is Umbridge. All in all this is a great story
AzureAlquimista chapter 31 . 9/10/2019
Very good fic... Although it would be a lot better and realistic if Ron had a real relationship with Rane or Lavender, and Hermione had to figth for Ron's love, as he did for hers.

It seems even a non "Hermione glorification" fic like this, can't scape from the Golden Rule: Hermione can be with others boys, but Ron never will be with other girls... Something totally ridiculous and sexist.

As always, Ron had the worst: Fighting for Hermione while Hermione was ignoring him and having fun with other boy, while Hermione had it ridiculous easy: "figthing" for Ron, but him accepting her advances, with no other relationship, and even Ron telling her she had no competition?... way too easy. As always Hermione is totally favoured by the writer.

Actually the fic's title makes this very clear: Hermione is Ron's "One and Only"... Never in the fic is said or implied Ron is Hermione's one and only, or she thinks this way about Ron...

Ron is Hermione's property, but Hermione is free to be with anyone she wants... Ironically, to take Ron for granted by this way of thinking, is the what Hermione did in canon, and it's one of the main reasons for the Ron-Lavender relationship.

Not matter this problems, the fic is good, and enjoyable.
Jules329 chapter 31 . 1/25/2018
Loved it, fantastic story.
Red King 27 chapter 1 . 4/7/2017
I dont think you read reviews anymore, but this is one of the best fanfics i have ever read. You used those small details like the letter portkey like JKR would. I usually hate OC characters in a fanfic, but the way you devloped those characters made me fall in love with them. Definitely in my top 3 ron/hermione fics.
luv-life chapter 31 . 12/7/2016
awesome story 3
Guest chapter 19 . 7/9/2016
Very well-written chapter.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/9/2016
Hermiones the worst. Although, that is actually a testament to your skills as a writer, that you can flip the sympathetic character from hermione to ron given how the story started. Anyway, this chapter was clearly a turning point in the story so we'll see what happens next!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/9/2016
Love Ginny in this chapter :)
Guest chapter 12 . 7/9/2016
Harry is annoying in this chapter. First he's all full of self pity even thought he's a liar. Than he pulls a guilt trip on ron, acting like its Ron's fault the trio won't be together on Christmas. The fault is clearly hermiones. Harry is a terrible friend here.
recycledsmiles chapter 31 . 4/13/2013
This story is one of the best that I've read so far. I love it so much it made me believe in love! ) You're a wonderful writer!
PF2724 chapter 31 . 12/19/2012
Good Story
rainbowlollipops15 chapter 31 . 11/19/2012
loved it!
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