|Reviews for Two Crows Joy|
| x-woman1 chapter 3 . 4/4/2006
absolutely LOVED it! the "date" was the most adorable thing ever! I love the chemistry that you write between Jack and Ennis, making their banter so natural and funny. Jack is so thoughtful. I liked how they made fun of the usual "first date" routine. cant wait for more, this chapter was the best yet!
| ItsaMiracle chapter 3 . 4/1/2006
Hey!..so whens the next chapter ready? by the way your awsome!
| Sam Cdn chapter 3 . 3/30/2006
You wouldn't believe the size of the grin on my face ... and it feels so very good! I really enjoyed their little date; it was so sweet. Actually, I was a little worried that it would become too sappy, but this,
“I know what you’re doin’. You been thinkin’ about all that stuff I said about not ever gettin’ t’date you, and how I was jealous ‘o Lizzie and Peter, so you got it into your damn fool head t’show up on my doorstep like some lovesick kid on his first real date, bringin’ me flowers like I’m some dame who’s gonna swoon into your waitin’ arms.” Jack’s face fell a little at being called out on his plan. “Ain’t that it?”
convinced me that you knew what you were doing and that if Jack and Ennis were going to go on a date, you were going to do it in exactly the right way! I also really liked the stable/restaurant, it was absolutely perfect for them. Anyways, wonderful chapter. I'm really looking forward to reading more so please, write, write, WRITE!
| Gilmore chapter 3 . 3/29/2006
Great that you updated again! This story and human interest are really amazing! You're writing is wonderful and the characters are perfect. I've read every chapter several times, I just can't stop reading, it's beautiful! Keep up all the good work and I hope to see another chapter soon :)!
| tini243 chapter 3 . 3/29/2006
Those two are too cute for words. Loved it.
| Kaiya Sumeragi chapter 3 . 3/29/2006
XD I laughed so hard my sides hurt! Jack was halarious! Update soon!
| dov chapter 3 . 3/29/2006
thank you, thank you so kindly. I appreciate your writing and willingness to share. I can't tell ya how happy I am to get to know Ennis n Jack in a different way. Your story feels so natural to me. I can hear their voice in my head when I'm readin' your words. My heart was happy to see Junior's warming to Jack. So many openings and story lines to follow. I'm looking forward to reading more. You're an accomplished writer.
Again, thank you.
| kipperoo453 chapter 3 . 3/28/2006
aw that chapter was SO sweet! there arnt words to describe how much i adore this story, please keep going and dont make me wait too lon g, its torture!
| One night stargazer chapter 3 . 3/28/2006
YAY another chapter, I swear you keep me wanting and dying for more. I love how you are able to caputre their love for one another, and it was really cute how you did the whole date thing. I remember the first date my husband/partner went on, and he did almost the same exact thing, excluding the flowers, but it was nice to remember something like that. Please keep up the excellent work and I hope you update soon.
| onefreetoroam chapter 3 . 3/28/2006
Especially liked the part about Ennis finding Jack on the front porch wondering why he was knocking on the door of his own house. ha ha. Also liked the 20 pounds of bullshit in a 10 pound bag - good one. Thanks for a great story.
| Inuyashas' Plaything chapter 3 . 3/28/2006
i love your story! it's so sweet and funny! Jack is such a sweetheart! please update soon! i can't wait for more! this is so my favorite story! JACK AND ENNIS FOREVER!-
| ballymay chapter 3 . 3/28/2006
Wonderful chapter especially the "date". Looking forward to the next chapter.
| x-woman1 chapter 2 . 3/22/2006
I really liked the part where Jack went to Junior's college and met her friends...Dean was hilarious, especially how he thought Ennis was hot, and I loved how Junior was all daring to the evil Golem (LOL) lady when she said the Jack was her "stepdad" and her "daddy's husband". I love it whenever you have Ennis call Jack "baby", its so adorable and beautiful. Only a few concerns though: I hope you don't have Ennis become too talkative with his feelings, saying "I love you" all the time, cause I loved it when he said it unexpectedly, it made it worth all the more because it was so rare. It would lose its specialness if Ennis became too open; it might get taken for granted and wouldnt mean as much as when it it suddenly bursts forth from his mouth when Jack is least prepared. As Dean says, I love how Ennis has the "real rugged, no-bullshit, High Noon thing going on" and I wouldnt want him to lose it.
I love your writing style, update again! btw, why were Ennis and Lizzy in Plattsburg?
| Sam Cdn chapter 2 . 3/21/2006
All right, so I finished reading "Human Interest" earlier today and I decided I'd wait a bit before starting on "Two Crows Joy" so that I could get back to the *ahem* real world for a bit ... well, so much for resolutions! I needed more and I was glad I gave in! I'm so excited to read more of this; it looks like this story is shaping up to be just as wonderful as the last! I totally loved how Jack kept thinking of that nasty monitor (or whatever she was) as "The Golem" ... hilarious!
OK, I just have to say one thing, and I really don't want you to take it as a flame because I really do appreciate and enjoy the skill of your writing. Thing is (now you've got me writing like Ennis and Jack speak!), I sometimes find in your writing that our two favourite men talk about things a little too much. For example, the whole thing with Ennis asking Jack if he ever wished he was a woman. Now, I realize that this didn't come easily for Ennis and that he had to struggle to put it out there, and I also realize that this Ennis is a different Ennis from the one we know from the story and movie since he's been changed by his life with Jack, but I can't help but question whether a conversation like this could ever happen between these two men. Now, that's just my opinion and in a way, I'm not so sure about it because I kind of like seeing how you'd imagine a conversation like this between them would go ... I like hearing what the two of them have to say about it! But when I really think about it, some of the conversations you've written between Ennis and Jack just seem a little bit too much for the two of them. Going back to Proulx's story, there is so much that the two of them don't say, but everything the perceptive reader needs to know is right there in front of him or her. But again, these two men are different from the ones in Proulx's story because they chose a different path. So basically, this is my opinion, but I'm not really sure of it and I'm totally fine with you agreeing or not agreeing ... I just wanted to put it out there!
Sorry about the really long review. Again, I really enjoy your writing and I am eagerly anticipating Chapter 3!
| Jods315 chapter 2 . 3/21/2006
So, I didn't get a chance to get in here yesterday after I read the chapter...I'm here now.
Just wanted to sayd "KUDOS" to Junior for introducing Jack around as her "Stepdad". Very sweet that she's warmed up to him as she's done.
It's too bad that Ennis still harbors all those fears...I think Jack needs to work on him...er, that with him. (*Did I just say that out loud?* LOLOL)
Great update in any case! Thanks again, so very much