Reviews for Divergence
hellkiss chapter 5 . 2/18
I love it
Really throughout thought
Well written

I love it and wanted to read more, but after almost ten years I suppose that it has been abandoned. Such a shame
Anne Camp aka Obi-quiet chapter 5 . 8/14/2017
Sad this was never updated. Hope you're alright. 3
Boop-Ba-Doop chapter 5 . 9/20/2016
kadeuz chapter 5 . 4/19/2016
I really loved this, I want to read more T.T
I wanna know if you are updating it.
Zinniaa chapter 5 . 10/4/2015
This is amazing refreshing raw potential . Update it . Please don't waste this story .
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Ardishana chapter 5 . 3/27/2015
This is such a good story. Please come back and continue it. I would be a shame for this to remain unfinnished.
tsukuyomi67 chapter 5 . 3/23/2015
I recently discovered this time-travel fanfic while rummaging through the time-travel communities and I must say, out of all the time travel stories out there, yours is completely unexpected and spontaneous due to the fact that I can feel that the story is quite fast paced and eloquent. By the way, I wanted to ask you what your plans in regards to the rookie nine would be. I know that you have already planned for Neji and Naruto but what about the others? Would Kakashi still be a jounin teacher? Also, in regards to the poll you had about the Uchiha problem, I think it would be nice if Itachi would not die. I know the polls already closed but I think that he at least deserves some recognition even in fanfics because out of all the characters in canon, he was the most loyal Leaf shinobi out there and I think that he would be useful in your story. I'm quite glad that you continue to surprise us readers with every chapter of yours. Also, will Jiraiya be included in being one of the people in the 'know' about Nawaki's secret? i kind of like the feeling where he would be left in the dark cause well, it's unusual but whatever floats your boat, I guess.
I also like the fact that you put details in every paragraph in regards to the character's thoughts and perspective and also, the scenery.
Hopefully, you can answer my questions cause I'm really curious.
Thanks for letting me read this unexpected time-travel fanfic that's out of the norm and I look forward to your updates.
Keep up the good work!
IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 5 . 2/8/2015
Excellent chapter! I am enjoying this story very much! As for mission/task/live training ideas, I have a couple ideas.
Idea 1: recon for saving one of the persons that Nawaki may help in the future.
Idea 2: hunting for supplies and using specialized jutsu that would only injure a person but kill a rabbit.
Idea 3: searching for more Jinchuuriki if applicable to the story.

I look forward to more chapters!
IsoldeAhlstrom chapter 4 . 2/8/2015
Well done! I know that the poll is closed, but I wanted to give my input anyway. My choices would be A, B, and C. I am sooooo enjoying this story! I can't wait for more!
kellyshl chapter 5 . 12/27/2014
I reviewed so you will updated liked you mentioned?
AnimeFreak71777 chapter 5 . 11/7/2014
Please update! :D
Manillalu chapter 5 . 3/30/2014
This is so cool! Like dream come true! Everything I could want in a time travel fic put in. Oro teme dies right off the bat, tsunade is back and I feel comfortably secure in the fact that this fic will go well. It's so reassuring. Oh, not to mention little naru, gaara, and neji at 6 are freaking adorable. I look forward to side missions that nawaki takes with kakashi and tenzo. Especially kakashi, I want to see the interaction!
BrightGhost91 chapter 3 . 1/29/2014
I am really excited about your choice of a third member for their team. I was really concerned that you would choose Haku, who for some reason I've never liked. It's a wonder how much the plot has changed in the years since this story has been posted, huh? No more Itachi-has-a-mental-breakdown to explain the Uchiha massacre. I'm glad Sasuke will stay loyal though. Thanks for posting!
mixxa chapter 5 . 5/2/2013
This fic is strange in good way and inspire people to think different from other. The flow is smooth and unpredictable. I'm looking forward to read more. Thank for your sharing.
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