Reviews for Smallville: Desire
Copper's Mama chapter 1 . 9/27/2009
great story, loved it.
Senatsu chapter 1 . 10/19/2007
That was...*licks lips*...absolutely delicious, my dear. And I quite appreciate how you give Lex the sense to not take it all the way, to wait until a later time.

And they were incredibly in-character. The setting was believable, as was the dialogue. Your descriptive writing was top-notch too. :3 Well done!
StarlightNinjaThief chapter 1 . 10/26/2006
col. u should do a sequal w/ them & alex(from lexmas)
HumansRSuperior chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
This is really gorgeous. The flow of your words and the descriptions are so potent and vibrant, it really brought the image, the story, to life. I love the attention to expressions, to fleeting touches, and you've captured their voices wonderfully.

I love how you described how Lana feels around Lex, how he makes her feel different than any other guy has. And I just love Lex's line to her in the car about wanting to protect her but he'll do his best not to smother her.

Extremely well done. Putting this in my favorites. :)

HRS ;)
LBF chapter 1 . 7/23/2006
I like this story. Its very sensual and nice how Lana let's Lex know how she feels.