|Reviews for Shadow Fox|
| TheDisruptiveOne chapter 4 . 3/17/2006
Nice. I liked the rant.
More importantly, the story. I liked Naruto's introduction with the group. It would have been nice to get some sort of hint of whether or not Naruto is attracted to Kin, but this wasn't so bad either. Will having 4 Genins in the group be a problem down the line? They can't do the Chuunin exam with 4 for instance? They are going on a mission? That's pretty interesting, I can't begin to imagine what kind of missions a shinobi from the Sound would have? Assassinations, robberies, etc I guess. Thanks for the update.
| Elicit chapter 4 . 3/17/2006
Story is coming along nicely, and that rant was hilarious.
| Meinos Kaen chapter 4 . 3/17/2006
AHAHAHAHAH! Man, your story is interesting, but your rants are great! I completely agree with you. C2ED!
| granite69 chapter 4 . 3/17/2006
cool chapter i like the way you have portraiyed kin...anyway time for my rant lol i have ot agree with the naru/hina thing i read one fic were within 4 chapters hinata was spreading her legs for naruto and thins was before naruto went of training for 3 years, there like 12 or 13 for cristsake and then you got the fics were hinata is kicked out of the hyuuga clan house and told never to come back i dont think so first she is the heir to the clan even if she is a weak ninja second they would obviosly put the juuin seal on her (i thinks thats how you spell it), and that stuttering thing she's got going on just fucking annoys me, dont even get me started on sasu/saku "hello my name is uchiha sasuke i have no personality and my vocabulary consists of hnn,yeah and fight me" and then you got sakura now i dont mind most of the girls in naruto but sakura is just crap her special skill... is she has so little chakra she can control it perfectly! for godsake even ino has that shintenshin thing she uses and what does sakura use a plain old bunshin not even anything special. and when naruto returns form training with jiraiya the only offensive moves she's got is that she has strength like tsunade which in my opinion isnt that good to start with 'sigh' right now that i go that of my chest, goodwork and update soon and continue the rants lol
| Skuld's Sentaro 6 chapter 4 . 3/17/2006
woot! another Kin/Naruto fanfic 3 lol interesting story, especially with naruto being a sound nin lol, any ways keep up teh good work and update soon V_ and i also agree with your rants, lol
| Achalon chapter 4 . 3/17/2006
Oh, my god... I love you man. You have the same feelings about Naru/Hina and Sasu/Saku as I do. - I mean, hell, honestly? If people put those pairings in the description of their fanfics, I won't touch the fic with a ten foot pole typically. I mean, "Oh my god, she stalks him! It's true love! Aw, I wish I had a stalker watching me with binoculars everywhere I went... I'd never send him to jail like those stupid preppy bitches on T.V!"
I love fics where Naruto ends up in Sound. They are so rare, but when well written they just turn out so well. Loving the story so far, can't wait to see more of it.
You should consider a short handled scythe (perhaps called sickle?) for Naruto. It fits well with his ability to get behind people. (If you put a knife infront of someone's neck, they still have the side to get away if they have enough speed. If you get a scythe around their neck, there is nowhere for them to move without taking their own head off. Gotta love that angled design. ) It would fit well with his chain whip, and require no real time to train because of the simplicity of its use. Infact, the whip could be attached to the bottom of the handle. If someone started moving too fast to get it around their necks, just spin it around and try to catch them with the whip. D (You could also attach a weight to the end of the whip for an effect similar to a ranged punch.)
| Dumbledork chapter 4 . 3/17/2006
| Silverlode chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Me likes this one...
| Resurgam-Csillaga chapter 2 . 3/17/2006
making kyuubi dance and joking about depression.. ahh w/e it's fanfiction.
Yah I agree thumbs are good without people can't play games or hold guns.. well then again if the US people didn't have guns we'd be a bit safer. dunno ha
| Resurgam-Csillaga chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Ohh so much drama and it's really getting off to a good start as one normally says me thinks.
*reads chapter 2*
| cursed chaos kitsune Kyuusune chapter 4 . 3/17/2006
nice rant got anything to diss the sannin like the snake-fag?
| TheDisruptiveOne chapter 3 . 3/16/2006
Kin/Naruto, hmm? I have always had a soft spot for the unusual pairings. I think I will like this one.
Naruto leaving Konoha and joining the Sound is also an intriguing concept. I can already picture him, Kin, and maybe Zaku arriving in Konoha for the Chuunin exams. That would definitely be interesting, wouldn't it? Answers to your questions. 1). Ice 2). Metal Claws (Vega from Street Fighter).
| granite69 chapter 3 . 3/16/2006
this chap was abit short but then again who am i to complain, it would be so cool if naruto could use the shadows like gaara can use his sand that would be cool but then again you dont want to make him to powerfull anyway goodwork and update soon
| granite69 chapter 2 . 3/16/2006
i enjoyed this chap the opposable thumbs had me actualy laughing out load not just laughing in my head and i have to agree with the foxs and shadow both of them just rule lol anyway goodwork and update soon
| granite69 chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
yay i have to agree with most of your ranting but i have to add one myself how come naruto is some smiling idiot running around the village pulling pranks, it just annoys me naruto has the possibly the coolect and most powerfull demon ever sealed in him and he doesnt have any demon like powers like gaara, and gaara has the one-tailed raccon in him whats the deal with it. one more thing i do like harry potter xover if there good the reason i like them is strange, i hate wizards there goddamn pussys they have no real training there pissant weak they look stupid wearing robes of all thing, thats why i like ninja's going over there and showing them how its done lol anway i like the first chap of this and thank god its a het pairing that isnt hinata at first that pairing wasnt so bad until ffn got swamped by naru/hina and naru/sasu(i dont think naruto would be a fudgepacker do you) anwya goodwork and update soon