Reviews for Innocence Slaughtered
venetiaj chapter 18 . 2/21
I liked this story. Your characterizations were excellent. My only problem-well-two problems are motive and access. How was John Doe able to find police families with young girls and so quickly? When did he have time to locate family and case the home before striking? I've always heard that police officer personal data like home addresses, etc was protected. Also, what was the motive? Goren always wanted motive-wanted to understand the why of the crime.
TAE60 chapter 15 . 9/22/2020
Should have been consecutive terms...otherwise, even 'life without parole' will come up for parole after 25 years, or so. But with consecutive terms, he has to serve 25 years for each sentence before coming up for parole. Stupid, isn't it? That the criminals have more rights than the victims or the families of those victims?
irusita chapter 18 . 12/8/2018
omg! this story is so amazing! so wellwritten and great un every way!
thank you!
Hazmatt chapter 18 . 5/24/2017
Amazing story! Very emotional! Those poor kids! I enjoyed it!
Nickie S.C chapter 18 . 3/18/2013
I read this story years ago and loved it. Now that I've made an account here, I had to come back and tell you what an amazing story this was. You really captured every character and what it would've been like had Goren and Stabler been forced to work together. Terrific job; I could see and hear it all in my head.
dh2930 chapter 18 . 6/13/2011
Well, I either wasn't with FF or I had not figured out how to review, but I managed to miss this great story. You nailed the smoldering, not so subtle undercurrent of Stabler's stubborn alpha-male-banty rooster attitude. I loved Alex's continued support, especially when she found him so close to ending Doe's life, and how she warned Fin and Stabler to get off Bobby's back. The case was intense and so very sad. I am so glad John Doe will rot in prison, or at least until the other inmates find out he is a baby killer. Nice ending...these two have always belonged together.
MidnightHalcyon chapter 18 . 11/27/2010
This was a really awesome story.
lawandorderfan20 chapter 18 . 1/12/2010
i love it you made me very happy. i love happy endings.
VivaJen chapter 18 . 8/14/2009
These is the best story in the whole website, please please create something remotly gunuiese to these! I love the crossover please do another crossover soon
Lord of the Shadows chapter 18 . 5/14/2009
You officially win the ultimate award for awesomeness. I worship you now. This was utterly fantastic!
EnforcerAndAccuserFan chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
You have the personalities of the detectives down pat. Furthermore, you do have set up an interesting case, with believeable supporting characters.

Keep up the good work.
H.M. 'Howlin' Mad' Murdock chapter 18 . 4/19/2009
This was so good i stayed up until 6 30 in the morning to finsh it. I highly recomend it. It's a great read. Going in my favourites.
Metalchick36 chapter 18 . 4/14/2009
Great story! I'm glad that Elliot finally warmed up to Goren, and I'm glad they all got that guy for killing those girls. Good job!
Umegat chapter 14 . 4/4/2009
Blast! NOW I remember why I didn't have this one bookmarked. Unfortunately for most of the stories here at , I'm so very much not a B/A shipper and thus I avoid those with summaries indicating "romance" and or B/A. Wish this one had mentioned either.

Oh well. I really enjoyed the first 13 chapters. Well-written dialog, good characterization of Bobby and Alex, Deakins. Can't speak about Liv and Elliot as I haven't watched much of LO:SVU, but nevertheless, liked what I read. Anyway, thanks for the first 13 chapters.
IwishSan chapter 18 . 3/25/2007
special victims and major case should work together more. )

good to see stabler and goren got along at the end. )
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