|Reviews for Rainy Days Hold Sunshine Promises|
| Bleustarcrash chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Grammar could use a little work, but I thought it was a good, well written scene. Just don't ruin it at the end by putting it down. Please!
| sweet.summer.rain chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
| Estelle chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
This is the first good fan fiction that i have read in a while! Please update!
| anon chapter 1 . 10/17/2006
hey! wonderful thing you have going on there. well done. was very cute and amusing. continue, please? _
| Inyri chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
Hey, I usually hate "sappy/mushy/out of character/sucky" but I genuinely enjoyed this one! I love the characterization, setting..everything! It was really good. Nice work!
Don't be afraid to put "sappy/mushy/out of character/sucky" pieces up!
| CRISTINA chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
I wanna find out wot happens next!:)
| Adam chapter 1 . 8/26/2006
w0t! Some shipperness! Finally. Not quite in the comic, but good enough. Well done aria, you write in a nice style.
| Tahn chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
OH MY GOD! That was so sweet! You did an awesome job of imagery and storytelling. You can feel what they are feeling. Touch of humor is always a good thing too. It was extremly well done. Awesome job! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
very cute. a little out of character for both Lei'ella and Varden at times, but overall it had the right mixture of shyness and cuteness. nicely written, please write more?
| Tinuel chapter 1 . 7/5/2006
Ah, I like it :)
Short, but cute. Overall done fairly well.
I dont like the phrasing of the kiss, however.
[to which Lei’ella was shocked to at first] ..its just badly worded, I suppose. Perhaps rephrase that? .
Other than that and a few other bad sentances, the basic idea of this was sweet.
| VanillaApple chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
aw, this is so cute
| Magic Bear chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
So tatally awesome! I liked it lots and lots, Varden & Lei'ella NEED to get together!
| alex robson chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
that was well good and its just like what i thought L and V whould do not the story but the nere a fire like a camp fire
| mangokitty chapter 1 . 4/15/2006
"the pointy elf ears of Lei'ella" sounds a bit unwieldy. Maybe "Lei'ella's pointy elf ears", or just "the pointy elf ears"?
The ending also is a bit awkward grammarwise (and characterwise, but it's a fanfic, you can make them do whatever you want!).
"kiss to which Lei’ella was shocked to at first, but then she.." The "to which" is odd-sounding, as is the "shocked to" Perhaps split it into several not so long sentences so that it sounds better.
| callie chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
awe! thats so cute and i could totally see Varden doing/saying something like that! LOVED IT!