Reviews for Learning to Love |
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o0o0oo0 chapter 10 . 7/3/2006 Ah, Rain sacrifices herself for the ones she loves. How heroically stupid of her. But, anyone in her situation would've done the same. I actually didn't think this chapter was really rushed. I guess it was the events themselves that naturally would've gone by quickly that may have given it an adrenaline-induced feeling... wait, what? I hate oxymorons. Anyway, thanks for letting me use the lyrics! Now that I think about it, this story and mine have a lot of similarities. But they were all unintentional! Don't worry. :) Um, Rain dying might leave more of an impact on readers, but letting her live would be beneficial to the genre of romance. So, I guess I vote for a happy ending: let her live. -...SA...- |
divinedragon7 chapter 10 . 7/3/2006 very good, and let her live |
CelticDreamer007 chapter 9 . 6/29/2006 That waz great! I luv how u did the suspense at the end! But Plz update soon I want 2 know what happens! Sorry I didn't review thourgh out the whole story I'm still kinda new and still figuring things out! but u rock out loud! |
LoveSickZombie chapter 9 . 6/29/2006 omg. *sobs* r u actually gonna kill Rain? or r u gonna find a way around it? i vote for the second one. lol |
o0o0oo0 chapter 9 . 6/29/2006 I think I got hit in the head with that curve ball. Wow! Now you have to update! I'll probably start to go insane after a few weeks of anticipation. It was a little harsh to have Jeremie agree wih Rain, though. I love the song! It's so completely amazing! Actually, I would love to borrow it. It fits in so perfectly with one of my stories... Please? I'll be sure to give you credit and everything. -...SA...- |
divinedragon7 chapter 9 . 6/28/2006 another great chapter |
purplelover chapter 9 . 6/28/2006 okay... wow! 1. Great song... 2. wow...poor rain... 3. UPDATE AGAIN FAST CAUSE I WANT MORE 4. AWESOME CHAPTER! 5. JEREMY IS EVIL IN THIS CHAPTER! Ready to leave a friend like that... So update! :D |
Heeeeey chapter 8 . 6/28/2006 Good story) |
LoveSickZombie chapter 8 . 6/27/2006 thats ok bout the wait. it was good enough to wait for. THANKS FOR UPDATING! bout time he said it. so...her dad is XANA? or XANA is her dad or something, even tho thats the same thing... update again soon please! -Lanae |
o0o0oo0 chapter 8 . 6/27/2006 [muse]-What kind of cake are you offering? I won't review until you tell me!- Wow, that was pointless. Anyway, very interesting twist at the end of this chapter! Now you have a whole new plot to explore and the story will continue. Um, do I really want to know how Rain's father (XANA) actually became... you know... Anyway, update soon! -...SA...- |
divinedragon7 chapter 8 . 6/27/2006 A good chapter, seems fine but that might be the lack of sleep talking |
purplelover chapter 8 . 6/27/2006 *gasp* RAIN IS XANA'S DAUGHTER! wow... UPDATE SOON! |
LoveSickZombie chapter 7 . 5/5/2006 YAY! atleast u updated |
katherine chapter 1 . 4/13/2006 wow! that was the most awesome story u should totally rite more ur so talented ur born to be a talented riter i hope i can rite like u well g2g bibi |
o0o0oo0 chapter 7 . 4/12/2006 uh-huh... I'm sorry, but I'm gonna have to agree with you on this one. It wasn't that the chapter plot was bad, it was just that the characters were a little OOC. I'm sorry 'bout your writer's block and sorry I don't have any ideas to help you. If I think of any, I'll be sure to PM you. Just make sure you watch out for that next chapter. -...SA...- |