|Reviews for The Rise|
| Yanirca chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
you should make it a happy ending please!
| JaMisa27 chapter 2 . 8/11/2010
aw hell this is gonna be awesome!
| killer 101 chapter 2 . 6/6/2009
i wanna F*king kill orochimaru I wanna mother-f*king KILL him he will die #$%%$#%# # #%$#$$#$# $ ! and i wanna $# #$ # %W# his ass he will $%$$&%$*$* $ $ #$%$% you here me i am gonna ! #% # !# !#%R%$%#$$%#$E # #% #Q $# $#$% ##234 #%%&*&*&*$%#! $%&&%$#$& $#%&&*&*&* die
| The giver of peace chapter 2 . 1/3/2008
please write another chapter it would be awsome if you did
| Tw33ty JR chapter 2 . 10/16/2007
I wanna finish the story
| BeautifulStruggle chapter 2 . 7/19/2007
Wow. This is a cool concept. I like it. I think the presentation can be a bit better, but overall i love this idea. I hope to see it continued.
| hieiashke chapter 2 . 6/7/2007
well? where's the updates? .
| XeroRami chapter 2 . 2/8/2007
Great story! I think you gave Orochimaru too much of a conscience, but then again I believe he must be very close to "as evil as possible." I'm sorry that one of your pairings is again (italicized) dead, but you seem to like separating pairs as much as putting them together.
Yeah, the life of a ninja is filled with imminent danger, but I like to think there is the possiblity of life (preferably long and peaceful) between these characters.
And don't stop this story...please.
| Kiki Rukata chapter 2 . 10/31/2006
yes please review
| luckyazn1177 chapter 2 . 9/17/2006
uh..im confused. let me get it straight...hinata died, but then orochimaru resurrected her? and she lost her memory?
| TaintedSnow chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
this is too fcking sad...
why do people like killing naruhina?
for you reader's enjoyment?
well im not liking it that much its way too sad for me to keep reading since the NaruHina couple is my favorite couple
| field innocence chapter 2 . 6/15/2006
that was good i hope hinata turn evil than this story would be even intersting, but its your story so do what u like that suit best.
| hinatauzumakimi3 chapter 2 . 5/31/2006
| Sayuri Junie chapter 2 . 5/29/2006
| CrazyGirlofManyNames chapter 2 . 5/28/2006
OROCHIMARU YOU ARE A SICK BASTARD AND DESERVET TO BURN IN HELL! OKay I'm done