|Reviews for I Will Stay Until You Fall|
| EvilyIsMe chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
I thought I was cute but sad, well done :3
| RichardIII1955 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
NOOO! MERCUTIO CAN'T DIE!
God, this is awesome! I was in floods of tears by the end...
I'll have to look at that musical you saw...
Loved your story! MERCUTIO IS THE BEST!
I hate Tybalt for killing him...
| SofaKittyKing chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
Hah, I read this at school, during fourth period, and I cried right after I read it. xD It was so sad. Lol, the song, Promise of a Lifetime by Kutless, added some effect to it. xD Great job. :3
| Highqueen Julietta chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
he really did ? lol!
well... very good! excellent dialogues... sads...
But u shouldve added more feelings-break our hearts!
| Foxsword chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
interesting. Not too mushy, which is good. My fave character is Mercutio, and I get sick of all these Ben/Merc things. So annoying. But FINALLY here's one I like.
| Paradoxxia chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
This is wonderful, lovely lovely LOVELY writing. A brilliant story, and you've really made his death beautiful. I think it's great that you've focused in on it, and everyone knows that BM actually happened. I can feel the love in this! :)
| ChickInStarkTower chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
OMG! This was AMAZING!
| Hug-Fairie-Chan chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
OMG! was this song caleld Mort De Mercutio? cuz if it is hold on...
*screams in the background* OMG I thought me and my friend were like some of the only ppl who have seen that musical...its so sad...i cry when i listen to it.
| katydidxo chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
if you kill mercutio, i will diee.
i loved it.
| Sir Gawain of Camelot chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
Hmm... Well, some of the contractions could be ironed out. Can't changed to cannot and suchlike. But all in all a rather pwerful peice.
xD Pshaw. Mercutio's got nothing on Hamlet for a long death scene here. I think Hamlet rattles on for half a page in my Compleate Works. That's quite a while. He proclaims himself dead a few times throughout. Mercutio's not that long in dying at all.
| Clieo chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Perfect! I like your style. Write more Love Clieo
| flower-carnage chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
Oh that was so sad! But it was still nice and sweet. I loved the flow and the language, especially this line: No, Mercutio had always been the brave and strong one. Crying was a thing for girls. But there was no bravery to trace near Mercutio now. It was really well-done. Poor Benvolio and Mercutio.
| ganja-chan chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Oh, that was sweet... I should not cry. I should not cry. Andzia, stop being silly, stop crying... *Andzia yells: MERCUTIO DIED!* I love Mercutio.
Good story, I must admit, good to read. Try mine: Blood Tastes Like Metal.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
Good story. There aren't enough Mercutio/Benvolio. And isn't it funny that in musicals, when people are dying, they have to sing a song while they're dying, which, if it were in real life, the person would have probably died while singing it. And about the movie you were talking about: Mercutio's last thoughts probably were about how no one believes he's dying. What a way to die, with no one practically calling you a liar. But enough ramblilng, please write more.