Reviews for I Will Stay Until You Fall
The Power Of Names chapter 1 . 1/21
This story managed to make me feel a bit sad. Not as much as when Mercutio died in the play, but still...
Thedumbbrunette chapter 1 . 11/19/2014
Beautiful! I am literally tearing up right now! Keep writing!
EvilyIsMe chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
I thought I was cute but sad, well done :3
RichardIII1955 chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
NOOO! MERCUTIO CAN'T DIE!

God, this is awesome! I was in floods of tears by the end...

I'll have to look at that musical you saw...

Loved your story! MERCUTIO IS THE BEST!

I hate Tybalt for killing him...
SofaKittyKing chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
Hah, I read this at school, during fourth period, and I cried right after I read it. xD It was so sad. Lol, the song, Promise of a Lifetime by Kutless, added some effect to it. xD Great job. :3
Highqueen Julietta chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
he really did ? lol!

well... very good! excellent dialogues... sads...

But u shouldve added more feelings-break our hearts!

HQJ

CONTINUE WRITING!
Foxsword chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
interesting. Not too mushy, which is good. My fave character is Mercutio, and I get sick of all these Ben/Merc things. So annoying. But FINALLY here's one I like.
Paradoxxia chapter 1 . 4/2/2008
This is wonderful, lovely lovely LOVELY writing. A brilliant story, and you've really made his death beautiful. I think it's great that you've focused in on it, and everyone knows that BM actually happened. I can feel the love in this! :)
ChickInStarkTower chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
OMG! This was AMAZING!

:)
Hug-Fairie-Chan chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
OMG! was this song caleld Mort De Mercutio? cuz if it is hold on...

*screams in the background* OMG I thought me and my friend were like some of the only ppl who have seen that musical...its so sad...i cry when i listen to it.

adieu
katydidxo chapter 1 . 3/2/2007
NO!

if you kill mercutio, i will diee.

DIE!

ahh.

i loved it.

so sweet.
Sir Gawain of Camelot chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
Hmm... Well, some of the contractions could be ironed out. Can't changed to cannot and suchlike. But all in all a rather pwerful peice.

xD Pshaw. Mercutio's got nothing on Hamlet for a long death scene here. I think Hamlet rattles on for half a page in my Compleate Works. That's quite a while. He proclaims himself dead a few times throughout. Mercutio's not that long in dying at all.
Clieo chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
Perfect! I like your style. Write more Love Clieo
flower-carnage chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
Oh that was so sad! But it was still nice and sweet. I loved the flow and the language, especially this line: No, Mercutio had always been the brave and strong one. Crying was a thing for girls. But there was no bravery to trace near Mercutio now. It was really well-done. Poor Benvolio and Mercutio.
ganja-chan chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
Oh, that was sweet... I should not cry. I should not cry. Andzia, stop being silly, stop crying... *Andzia yells: MERCUTIO DIED!* I love Mercutio.

Good story, I must admit, good to read. Try mine: Blood Tastes Like Metal.
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