Reviews for Deceiving
Guest chapter 10 . 11/11/2012
momo and kiley!
deltawolf524 chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
its Kiri
green mangolia chapter 10 . 5/29/2010
really good can u write another chapter soon? i ju

st finished reading them but inoiteced ur last update was last year
Lady Elya chapter 10 . 1/13/2010
Awesomness . yay, Momo is finally fighting back. I just can't believe Toji, how can she think Momo is beating Sae, Sae is a princess for haven's sake! Ugh, so frustrating! (ups, I got a lil' bit carried away xD) Anyways, I wanted to say Momo should be with Kiley! Please tell me she will be with Kiley ! Please? *puppy dog eyes* :D
kearia chapter 10 . 11/22/2009
hi my name is kearia i read all 10 chapters in a few hours and i say if i were a real critic i would be critizizing you to write more of this series also i would be a fool not to publish this highpaced even lovelier than the original i loved how you organized this brillant story and really i like how you put them in medieval times absouloutly lovely
pink-kiss-candy chapter 10 . 7/18/2009
:D I was starting to think this would never finish, I'm so happy.
Lost in My Sapphire Eyes chapter 9 . 1/31/2009
Hey,hwy haven't you updated in, like, two years? This is a pretty good, well-written story. I believe you should continue. Oh, I think Momo should end up with Toji. Kiley is too big-brother/best gay guy friend-ish. Maybe you should make him have an affair with Sae's stable boy, Ery. That'd be interesting!
xN00DLES chapter 9 . 4/20/2008

Damn, i can't decide who i want momo to end up with.
xN00DLES chapter 8 . 4/20/2008
This should end with Momo Toji, and me Kiley. ;)
xN00DLES chapter 6 . 4/20/2008
I see that Sae is as bitchy here as in the manga -_-

Love the story though! (:
xN00DLES chapter 4 . 4/20/2008

You are one of my favourite authors (:
xN00DLES chapter 2 . 4/20/2008
Ih x3

This is great :'D
bunny chapter 9 . 3/1/2008
wow. this is pretty good. one of the fanfics I actually like. hope you come out with more soon.
anonymous chapter 6 . 1/18/2008
Nice story. Absolutely loved it.
SilverMoonFairy chapter 9 . 1/17/2008
Hello! I just read your entire story thus far while waiting for Episode 8 of Peach Girl to load on my computer. I LOVE Peach Girl and I LOVE your story. Chapter 8 is my favorite so far. *huggles Kiley and steals him away* If you want my opinion, I love Kiley more than Toji and would vote for a Momo/Kiley ending, BUT, to make it interesting, unexpected, and just to be different from the rest, I think it should end with... Momo/Ryo, lmao! I know Ryo sucks *read volumes 2 and 3 from Change of Heart* but, it'd be different! Hehe. I can't wait for an update, I love your writing!
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