Reviews for Slaves
RavenxRobin chapter 2 . 7/21/2014
I love the story so far, keep updating!
1rx4u chapter 2 . 3/30/2013
It's cute, has potential, but needs completion.
RobRaealltheway chapter 2 . 11/6/2011
I know it's been ages, but please, please, PLEASE update this story! It's really interesting and I want to see how this bet brings the birds together! *gives hopeful look*
myyaire chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
heheh i think robin should win the compatition just saying
iamnuff chapter 2 . 3/23/2009
not bad, cant wait to see what else he trys
TTRaven4Ever chapter 2 . 2/16/2009
Ahh, raven is so random! ;p
Storm Warning chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
Osicles love to see how this ends how will he make her happy?
karen houston chapter 2 . 4/13/2007
I realy liked it so far so can you please cointinue.
Patriot-of-USA chapter 2 . 3/29/2007
Ha! I'm loving it!

This is a pretty interesting look at Raven and Robin. You do an excellent job of including minor characters like the flowershop saleswoman.

I am interested to see where this story goes.

Keep it up!
Alekin chapter 2 . 1/22/2007
Uh! gambling! I wonder how more can Raven stand if Robin keeps doing that cute gifts (romantic, isin't it?)

Very good idea! I'm eager to read more! nice writing too ;)
Annavi chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
it's an ok story so far it could be alot better though .

i'm sure you just working up to something though,i can't wait to see the rest of it!

Creative Spark chapter 2 . 8/7/2006
erm... UPDATE!
Emma chapter 2 . 7/27/2006

REALLY really really good!

update as soon as you can! please please! i love the plot that you've set up so far it's really good!

keep writing!

BlackRaven1316 chapter 2 . 7/23/2006
LOVE it update soon! please!
Jadee chapter 2 . 7/6/2006
Over sixty dollars for 12 flowers and a sack of marbles? o.0 woah... must have been some pretty nice flowers!

But as for the story... I like the idea. Very unique. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Update soon. :)


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