Reviews for Eden
thiswaybecauseofjacob chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
Aw, that was sweet. Luff the fluff. You're very talented, you write perfect fluff.
QueenOfHearts3 chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
A/N: halelujah! _ love it when the girl gets a backbone hehe and its in SK! yay, my fave

intro ~ i hope she wasnt expecting him to jump on the chance to go out in public, and theres that lil thing about his heart condition (darn you, drugs! *shakes fist*)... but whatever _ like the lyrics. SB is cool :D fishface, thats one i hadnt heard, but it fits weirdly enough lol

shy ~ *falls over* "shy"? SHY? o_O() Christine, who in the blue monkey heck dya think youre talkin to? the man is a friggin RECLUSE, for cryin out loud! its not like hes gonna be winning all that many communication awards any time soon (cept in the area of his composing, of course hehe). over all, this just strikes me as one of those "things to make you go 'duh'" moments lol

embrace ~ aw *grins widely* sweetness. our dear Erik doesnt know what to think hehe

"monster"~ yes... this is where i would like to make voodoo dolls of Madeleine, the gypsies, and everybody else who ever made him feel worthless _() *twitch, twitch*

kisses ~ eek! *sniff, cry* how bloody sweet is that? sux that his illness would intervene, but of course it would... *sighs* feh

wonderful priest ~ *grins widely* reminiscent of Father Mansart, only without the whole "warding off the evil" that one seemed to be obsessed with in regards to Erik (never was fond of that. just treat him like a human being and itd be cool, rather than that "dangerous, monstrous genius" bit *sighs*) _ cool

awake ~ *laughs and shakes her head* aw geez lol XD but yeah, Thierry has quite a quick wit on him hehe i especially like the "underground home" insight. very perceptive

promise ~ bout dang time a pure stranger offered him nothin but kindness _ lovin it *huggles Erik* dang heart condition...

"stay" ~ *cries*

shock ~ aw, thats cute :D *tackles fluff*

"once more" ~ hehe thats great. wonder what cultures those are. hm...
AngelOfMusic387 chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
Aww. That was sweet. Is this going to be a multi-chaptered story? It should be. But if it's not, then I guess that's your choice. Good job either way.
Fantome de l'Opera chapter 1 . 3/31/2006
Oh, it's so wonderful cheri! You write so... well it's so... beuatiful! I love it!
forbidden-red-rose chapter 1 . 3/27/2006
I can not tell you how lovely I found this story. It's always refreshing when someone depicts Christine as a real young women, not some simpering twit. Thank you so much for this lovely bit of reading.
Marie chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
Aww... I love it- please continue!

Phantasmarose chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
Once again, you got it spot on. Bravo! How can you improve it? I can't imagine. Your piece is poignant and sweet. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Christine8025 chapter 1 . 3/15/2006
This is such a beautiful story. Please write more.
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