Reviews for The Prodigal Cheerleader
Goldenbassets chapter 13 . 11/29/2017
This was lovely!
Goldenbassets chapter 9 . 11/29/2017
Omg I have tears running down my face I am laughing so hard! This is the funniest damn circle rendition I have ever read! Omg my stomach hurts! Holy crap that was funny.
Vampy.rEVOLution666 chapter 13 . 10/25/2017
The ending was so sweet xx JH was meant to be xx
Guest chapter 13 . 8/9/2017
I love you're writing and I love this story. I also loved the character of Barry, he was so funny. Thanks so much for creating such a great story.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/8/2017
I just came across this story and I love the characters of Hyde and Jackie. You are such a great writer! The story was so interesting. I also love the character of Barry, he was outstanding! I know it's been a few years, but I hope you write more character stories about the two of them. Thank you.
Guest chapter 9 . 6/3/2017
As much as I love your writing and this story, Hyde just doesn't deserve Jackie. She should've given him the cold shoulder a lot worse. I mean, he told her he never loved her before she left and then when she comes back says she's a coward and he deserved better and no one would ever love her? Uhhhh, in what world? She doesn't even mention he said that and it was straight up CRUEL. So, at this point, I just feel like he doesn't deserve Jackie and she should have enough self worth to walk away. And they're my OTP, so that says something.
Margareitha Malfoy-Nott chapter 9 . 12/9/2016
I love your character Barry! So much sass!
Acru9837 chapter 13 . 11/4/2015
bleedingnightingale chapter 2 . 3/4/2015
Wow another great OC! Awesome!
Clementine Buttersnaps chapter 3 . 11/4/2014
I had to skip to the end of this just so I could review Barry. I love him!
Aldrean Treu Peri chapter 13 . 9/24/2014
What a wonderful story to read after the one where Jackie decided to move on to college!
appalove chapter 3 . 2/2/2014
Barry is awesome in this chapter. I love the line about setting money on fire, what a sass! Hehe.
appalove chapter 13 . 1/3/2014
Awwww! As others have said, Barry was a great original character. Nice closure at the end. :) It's great that Hyde finally took that leap to change his lot in life. Only thing is the story could have been longer, but it was a solid work overall. Thanks for sharing.
appalove chapter 5 . 1/3/2014
This is the silliest little comment ever, but the editor in me had to say - I'm so glad you wrote "well kempt" instead of "well kept"! Bravo, grammar winner. :) More comments on actual plot and writing points to follow, lol.
Branlyn1974 chapter 13 . 8/28/2013
I just finished your story and I loved it! Just enough drama between Jackie and Hyde but not as much as in other stories which to me is great because they make Jackie out to be so weak which we all know she is not. Her weakness is Hyde but when it comes down to it she has always been able to stand on her own even if it scared the crap out of her which your story really shows. I cried a bit at the funeral but it stuck to the humor of the show also by not making it too sappy and the way you showed the friendship between all of the gang was perfect and so real. When you have such close ties with people it doesn't matter how long it's been when tragedy strikes, you just jump right back in where you left off! Would love to read any other stories you have written so please let me know what to look for. Thanks for a great story!
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