Reviews for Deception
Cores chapter 17 . 2/16/2014
Great chapter . The conversation between Danny and Martin is simply perfect .
Guest chapter 17 . 2/16/2014
great! Above all the final part: great dialogue between Danny and Martin. Friends are the best gift of life...Thanks for this chapter.
Guest chapter 16 . 2/1/2014
Great! thanks! the team together as it used to be! The team I got to know and love before the writing ruined everything! I am looking forward to Martin and Danny and then the team together! Grazie! brava!
Cores chapter 16 . 2/1/2014
Great chapter! . I am looking foward Danny and Martin .
Kimberleah chapter 16 . 1/31/2014
I'm enjoying reading good WAT FF. Keep up the good work.
Ukeleleboy chapter 15 . 1/27/2014
I've enjoyed a lot reading the last updates. Thanks so much for the good ideas and good writing, and overall for keeping 'our' Danny alive. Looking forward what's next.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/25/2014
GREAT! I saw the car, how he wan't hit, I have no idea... and Jack realizing the mistake he did when he slammed him against the car. I have never understood what he did wrong with the kid, since he found him in the classtrom, the kid saw Danny, Danny looked around..what could he have done? say."Hey, kid, wait there! I am gonna call the Boss"...super chapter. And you wrote Viv will soon appear...I am really looking forward to her! Thanks !
Cores chapter 15 . 1/24/2014
Great chapter . In the previous chapter , I would have prefered that Danny to explain his pain , his torture to Martin instead of Jack . On the show , Danny told Martin about his past , his alcoholism. For me , it does make sense , more interaction Danny and Martin than with Jack .
Guest chapter 14 . 1/9/2014
poor Danny...:(( Great chapter: the storm helped you to write such a sombre page, didn't it? I hope to read more soon and see a smile on his face again. THANKS for writing this story ! Looking forward next chapter!
Kimberleah chapter 14 . 1/8/2014
Be interesting to see if the team can help Danny through this.
Cores chapter 14 . 1/8/2014
Excellent chapter . Poor Danny .
Ukeleleboy chapter 13 . 12/31/2013
Is this a Xmas gift? I'm so happy you decided to continue this story. More than happy you're in WaT mode. Love this story, I had to reread it to refresh my memory but it's worth.
Suggesting to continue (after this one) with "A matter of Chemistry", please.
Keep the good writing!
Cores chapter 13 . 12/30/2013
Very good chapter as always .
Guest chapter 13 . 12/28/2013
the tide is growing...THANKS for this intense chapter. Looking forward to the team reunited to fight for Danny...great chapter!
Guest chapter 12 . 12/21/2013
AHAHAH! SUPERGREAT ! I have been looking or Danny meeting Martin...Great, great, great. The team as it used to be, the one we fell in love with in the first great seasons is here again, working together. Thanks FEN, really GRAZIE ! You are super! ( and fast in posting, which is extrasuper!)
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