Reviews for Four of Hearts
BreAnne145 chapter 2 . 8/16/2012
Loved the story so far. I see you haven't updated in awhile. Are you done with this story? Please let me know!
Trickster's Queen of War chapter 2 . 4/11/2006
wonderfuly job!
saturn567 chapter 2 . 4/8/2006
loved it! can't wait for more! glad Colin is all right!
Wolf Jade chapter 2 . 4/8/2006
Well this chapter made me all fuzzy inside. Well the end of it did with the Colin/Jess moment. I'm glad Raya is going to help them take down her father. I think that also partained to the fuzzy-ness even though I've never like daughters or sons betraying their parents in a story, it's so repetative. But it works in this so I guess it's alright.

Now, keep up the great work and update when you can.
Mandy543 chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
Great story! Can't wait till you update!
Wolf Jade chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
This is a wonderful story so far. A few grammar mistakes, but nothing you have to worry about. It's just comma's being in the wrong spots. But I do so the same thing so I'm not really going to mind them, I would be a hypocrite if I did care about them.

Neways, I can't wait to see what happens next. So please update soon.
saturn567 chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
love this story already!
Trickster's Queen of War chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
WOnderfully Done PLease update soon!
CaterinaFan159 chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
I love this story it is awesome. Please update soon
Paula79 chapter 1 . 3/16/2006
Love the story Idear lookforward to reading more.

Happy writing