|Reviews for Trapped|
| TotalAlaskan chapter 1 . 12/28/2015
I really really want to say that it's Raphael, but the whole "there was a roar, a loud, mighty roar, and I knew who it belonged to" makes me think that that was Raph and the captured person was Leo. And if that's the case than the person who kept telling him to sit down would have to be Raph as well. Nobody else would act like him there.
| ClotiPheebs chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
For the longest I thought Raph... but I'm leaning more towards Leo. Had more a feeling of guilt, I see Raph as complaining about kicking butt the whole time. Not of his mistakes. Very good imagery details though
| Lil-Red06 chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
this was really good!:)
At first I pictured Donnie but after re-reading it (particularily the beginning) the language seemed to suit Raph the best. That, and the fact that none of his brothers spoke to him in a brooklin accent. Also, at the end his brothers spoke so kindly to him that I couldn't imagine Raph would be as calm if his brother had been captured.
thats just my thoughts though
I loved it! keep writing
| changeofheart505 chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Kura: uh... Raphael?
Sakura: Not sure, Raph?
| xxxox chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
It was either raph or leo
| Lunexa chapter 1 . 6/6/2013
Its Leo! Am I right? :)
| RubyRainAlchemist chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
Wow I really love this!
I think it's Raph because 's my favorite and my mind always points to him first and 2. Although they all hate being weak/helpless the others realize sometimes you are and you can't change that.
I think you should continue this it's really good. Please please please tell me who you wrote this as.
| AbiWritesThings chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
I didn't really try to guess, I just pictured it as Raph. Then I read it again and pictured it as Leo. Then Donny. Then Mikey. So I read it a total of four times. Yeah it was THAT good.
| Raphie114 chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
Gah! So who is it?
I hate not being certain of sth _
Tell us please!
| Do a Barrel Roll chapter 1 . 11/6/2010
It was Leo, right?
| tmntlover2013 chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Great job on the story I liked it alot, and was the trapped person Leo, please emill me answer thanks.
| narakunohime chapter 1 . 5/12/2010
Loved it. _
And, let me guess..
...uhm, it was Raph, right?
| ponygirl-loves-mcqueen chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
I think it was Raphael. He talks about losing himself when he gets angry and frustrated and wanting to kick his brother to shut him up, and he semed pretty determined to kick butt, despite the fact he could barely move. Also, he saw flashing blades from his brothers fighting, and although Raph has blades too, I think Leos would be more.. FLashy :D Awesome story!
| Moonsetta chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
OK AWESOME STORY!
Well it's obviously Leonardo or Raphael those were the characters in the info. Also when they spoke of patrolling I assume they are the only two that would do it alone.
The cursing definitely makes me think Raphael but the fact that the character is biting back these moans makes me think Leonardo because Raphael is not one to hold back well, anything he'd be going crazy if he was still conscious. The loud mighty roar also said that Raphael was fighting therefore not the prisoner.
Also the prisoner putting himself down all the time definitely screams Leonardo, Raphael would be thinking how to kick the enemies but when he got out of there.
The sneering glare does sound quite like Raphael but the line, "Even with the pain burning furiously through me, I sent him the best, worst sneering glare I could master," Raphael wouldn't have a problem with a sneering glare even if in pain so once again I think Leonardo.
The "Sorry" near the end also makes me think Leonardo because I would think Raphael would be complaining about being captured and ambushed other than apologizing for any trouble he caused. Also they said it wasn’t his fault again Leonardo because he has always felt deep guilt for putting his family in danger.
My ending conclusion is that it’s most likely that it’s Leonardo but it could be any of them really.
I think it’s amazing you can write a story and have readers experience it through the character of their choosing this could of easily of been any of the four turtles. You could probably take out and replace a few lines and have people think its Casey or Splinter.
| CaptainKrueger chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
At first I thought it was Leo, but then my thoughts pointed towards Raph. Maybe you can tell us?