Reviews for Look Beneath the Surface
Pharies chapter 13 . 1/25/2017
The pacing was a little odd for me, but I liked the story overall .

~Tori
Uglyduckling1023 chapter 4 . 9/14/2015
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confuzed1978 chapter 13 . 12/12/2014
very cute story. i like how the stages of naley changed. first haley was more into him and then nathan realizing that he cannot live without her.
thibbs65 chapter 13 . 7/2/2014
loved your story, but why does Nathan always cheat on Haley( with Peyton) in the beginning
Godschildtweety chapter 13 . 9/24/2011
Real good
Harry Snape-Potter chapter 9 . 10/5/2010
once a cheater, always a cheater. no matter what anyone says.
anon chapter 3 . 1/25/2009
Hey. I think you may have a good story line here but I'm going to give a bit of criticism if you don't mind. Some of the story is confusing because usually when a different person starts talking you start a new line. Great Job apart from that small grammatical error.
HJS-NS-23 chapter 13 . 8/23/2007
wow this was a cute little story great job on it!
antsB chapter 7 . 1/7/2007
like it so far
AngelLuva chapter 13 . 8/17/2006
nice story.. :):):)
Chris-Crips chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
o btw i know i have already read this fic before but its my all time favourite so i just wanna write a review about how much i like it i liked your other ones but if i had to choose which was the best it would be this one i just cant stop reading it its like amazing! PRAISE KAT!
kellneriner chapter 13 . 5/24/2006
hEy...

dIs sToRy iS qUiTe nIce...bT iT hAS sOme fLawS n Is nOt As GooD As dO nO hArm n dA sTory WheRe hAleY hA cAncEr...

gOOd jOb Tho..

kEEp oN EntErtAininG uS wiF NAleY stOrIes...
Chris-Crips chapter 3 . 4/16/2006
omg im so dense i finally noticed wat the JL label also stands for (not sure if its a pun) not onli does it stand for the james label but also joy lenz/james lafferty *claps* im a clever boy :D
JPNeverlosetheButterflies chapter 13 . 4/15/2006
this was a great story one of my favorites
LadyGambit chapter 13 . 4/6/2006
Just caught the stroy, loved the drama and great ending!
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