Uwu!

Well Jeff. I finally got to read one of your stories. It has a plain and straightforwardness about it,

tht I just loved. It was not all syrupy or dreamy like many other stories I have read.

I liked the fact you kept them so true to the real story. No I love yous, or such. Thank you for

the standing by the originals...

You are very good at making the surroundings seem textured and real also. Thank you sir...janice

Zane, this is heartbreakingly accurate. If you wrote more, I'd hope for a happier ending than the movie gave us. As far as your description of each moment, each day that they "had a good time that year, didn't they?" - It was Never Enough Time, Never Enough Detail, Never Enough Conversation, Never Enough Loving.

good story

Really enjoyed this, Zane, for all the reasons other reviewers have said, and also the reversal (from how it went in the rodeo cowboy scene in the movie) when Jack catches Ennis staring at him, and this time he's the one who says, "What?" and then Ennis, thank god, replies, "It's damn good to see you, Jack," instead of staying silent, or turning the feeling aside with a joke.

Thanks for a great read.

I applaud you! Love the way you bring out the emotions...poor Jack...made them both very in-character. I like how you didn't have them just throw themselves at each other as soon as they were alone, they got the things done that needed to be done and only then did what they really wanted to. I loved the snowball line. -grin- All in all, a very good fic!

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Hey Zane-wonderful story. Thanks for posting. :-)

That was fantastic.

I really like how you kept both in character.

Are you planning on another chapter or a brand new fic?

I'm hoping that you would.

Thank you!

very nice story i liked it a lot

As I've told you, your stuff is great. This is some of the closest-to-the-story/movie writing that's out there.

Once again, bravo.

Steve

Liked this - it's great to see a little change in the story - hope it continues with Ennis maybe heading up to Lighting Flats or along similiar lines? Thanks for a great story.