Reviews for Missing Duo
tyleet88 chapter 24 . 4/24/2016
Guess you left the fathom it's been a long time since you up dated anything. :( sad Hope all is well
DaughterofDante chapter 24 . 10/30/2013
Amazing
JuneJ chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
hey this is June. i love his story and wandered why you nevered finished it. i have been checking back and forth to see if a new chapter was written. First since this is a M rated story the sex sceen between Duo and Heero should hot, long and intence. they to think what any jealous bitch would do when so called man hearted has been taken by someone else. You have a writing style and a lot to feed off of in you story once you find it this story would be a great sucess.
TheManBehind-TheJokersMask chapter 24 . 7/6/2008
omg this is good u soo should write more i love it i wanna hear duo and heero confess to each other please!

~megan
Little Bug1024 chapter 24 . 4/13/2008
Ok it'll be 2 months tomarrow for being a year since you last updated this story. I was just wondering if you've abondond this one or what? Also' for the feed back I think Relena needs to get caught in her next plot as well as being caught for the last attempt on poor Duo. Either she confesses to it or they find out by other means. this is a good filler chapter and hope you'll write more on this story. Please let me know if you've abandoned this story.
Soaha chapter 24 . 9/9/2007
-mad cheering- Ladies and Gentlemen, Shinigami is back from Hell! :D
demon m-chan chapter 24 . 6/15/2007
i'm very glad that you got the next chapter up, and i can't wait for the next one, but there were a few grammatical errors, and i feel that relena is a little *too* OOC. don't get me worng, i love this fic, but for someone that is supposed to be a pacifist, she seems very violent and willing to use violence to get her way.

i understand where you are coming from, but even when it comes down to heero, she seems more like the type of person to have someone do her dirty work for her (i don't know if you've read this, but a long fic with a really well-written superEVIL!relena is 'web of betrayal' written by dyna dee). her character seems a little under-developed in this story, like she is a robot only there to cause duo angst and to be hated.

(i have some ideas, but i haven't read the whole fic in a while, so i might have forgotten some details.) my first suggestion is give relena a little more meat to her character. she hates duo because he is "scum" but she acts no better than /she/ expects /him/ to. if her thoughts are going to be all high and mighty, they need to be less juvinile. she has to act more like the "queen" she thinks she is. don't make her attampt to get rid of duo just yet, (she tried, she failed, now it's time for someone below her to do her dirty work) have her wait, or not do anything physical. have her talk to duo, pretend to apologize, (and blame it on PMS or something), and then use one of women's best weapons, her words, to inflict doubt upon duo. also maybe some sweet fluffy scene between duo and heero next
Serenity Maxwell chapter 24 . 6/14/2007
*laughs* i love it. there is so much you could do too. i mean if it will work or backfire and get her. maybe get her in a cage and plug her with truth syrum as it back fired and she wanted to know how duo got herro. lol.
demon m-chan chapter 23 . 3/29/2007
yay! they're finally togather again! happy ending soon! i can't wait until the next chapter, i am loving this fic... _
tyleet88 chapter 23 . 3/20/2007
Reveiwing :D...Heero can move fast ..lol..so when you going to update again hm :D..
TheDevilMayCry chapter 23 . 3/20/2007
Im glad that your problems are all fixed and I wait eagerly for the next chapter! :D
Red Phoniex chapter 23 . 3/19/2007
aw...so sweet! Loved the ending, can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting.

Red
Serenity Maxwell chapter 23 . 3/18/2007
i loved it! i have no idea if anyone else was like this, but i so did not see that end comming.
snowdragonct chapter 23 . 3/18/2007
Yes! Finally an update! And Duo got his memories back. Cool chapter. Hope you update again soon.
Tula Fate chapter 22 . 2/26/2007
love the story _ update soon?
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