|Reviews for A Walking Shadow|
| DontCountMeOut chapter 62 . 12/31/2013
-squeal!- AH! Oh my god! This, this had me on the edge of my seat the whole time! This was fantastic. Absolutely positively wonderful! Any awards and nominations for this story speak the truth, this was the best SSHG I have ever read. Period. Congratulations on a well written and delightfully charming story. And thanks as well, because, again, the best I've ever read for these two. I don't think I can be unbiased with other stories now. Don't get me wrong there are some really good ones out there, but this is just, no words right just, just no words. I loved Tayet. And the twists. And the- just everything!
| marisamarinee chapter 6 . 11/25/2013
Interesting. Although a bit confused
| marisamarinee chapter 5 . 11/25/2013
| marisamarinee chapter 4 . 11/25/2013
| marisamarinee chapter 2 . 11/25/2013
| marisamarinee chapter 1 . 11/25/2013
Ahh! I'm hooked!
| pewterlocket chapter 4 . 10/31/2013
Enjoying the story so far, on chapter 4. Congrats on your nomination.
One thing annoying me is the constant POV changes.
Otherwise the pacing is great - it doesn't dawdle and is moving along, keeping my interest.
| hpfanficfanpollmod chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
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SHIP: SNAPE X HERMIONE
CATEGORY: BEST LEGACY STORY for "A Walking Shadow"
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| HelpmeHermione chapter 45 . 8/22/2013
Ok, I love this story and so far it's been smooth sailing. However I am gonna complain because in this chapter with the scene between Finny and Harry you did the unforgivable! In almost every turn of speaking to one another they call them their name. I have never met a person who says my name constantly when speaking to me, nor do I speak like that. Usually a person's name comes up once in a greeting, and maybe when someone is being emphatic, sarcastic, or droll they may say the persons name again. ie. "Sure Harry, whatever you say." So it was like Ginny, Harry, Ginny, Harry! There are other clever ways to let everyone know who is speaking. And in many of the scene you were quite good at. So I thought I'd poimt it out as it was a distraction and a pet peeve. Anyways, keep on writing! I love the way you write your passionate scenes, it's like poetry, yet better cause I'm not really even into poetry. I get it though, it's quite discriptive.
| semicharmed chapter 62 . 6/25/2013
| Fraulein Takoor chapter 8 . 6/23/2013
Page 394, it reminds me oh Harry Potter 3 when Severus replaced Lupin :-)
| squeaky521 chapter 62 . 4/5/2013
Wow. Mesmerizing, confusing, but yes, mesmerizing all the same.
| pathgirl chapter 3 . 4/1/2013
Hmmm... Loved the previous chapter but the dialogue did not flow very naturally in this chapter.
| Emylee A.H Colin chapter 49 . 3/14/2013
My name is Emylee Adende Hermoine Colin (pronounced 'emily a-don-day her-mine-ee col-een, I was named for my uncle Adende and my parents just really liked the name Hermoine) and I am attracted to Severus Snape in a way that I cannot EXPLAIN! He's so serious, I want to make him laugh, and his hair... And his eyes... Yes, his perfect eyes... In the books, they are black, but in the movies are a beautiful brown. Absolutely beautiful. And. He's. Just. So. Damned. Alluring! And so intriguing in that way...
| TheLadyJaye chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
She punched Mrs Black?! Epic!