Reviews for Valentine's Day aka fanfic 9
myfriendscallmecrazy chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
aw! so cute!

ok, as for the so-called lame ending: it wasn't lame. although...you could add a kiss in there somewhere. that'd be cute (and fluffy! 3)

but otherwise, great story!

~MFCMC
readeradv chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
I think the Commander has gone cuckoo...
demented cookies chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
it's sweet! Holly and Arty make a cute couple! one thing tho, i think it's going a bit too fast. It doesn't have to be a oneshot. It would be nice if you added a few more details and chapters.
Cousin1 chapter 1 . 8/28/2006
YAY! FLUFF! ARTY AND HOLLY LOVE EACH OTHER!

holly: NO WE DON'T

me: of course you do! you said it!

holly: what do you mea... *reads fanfic* AHRGHH! NO!

arty: what's going on? holly? are you all right? are you hurt? what's happening? *reads fanfic* ...

me: YAY! BYE! *runs away. saying over and over to an angry holly "I DIDN'T DO IT!"*
By Grace Alone chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Love it! VERY FUNNY! Too perfect!
Annie-morphs chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
Yay! Valentine's Day! And it's Holly and Artemis! Oh, you make me soo happy! )

AWW! Artemis wrote a letter to her! Oh, so cute!

Okaay. I'm confused with what Holly just said too. So Root isn't alone.

I'm in the middle of the little fic and I keep thinking: KISS HER, ARTEMIS! LOL! I'm crazy.

Aw, man! They didn't kiss. I'm a bit disappointed, but this was really awesome! I loved it. It was really cute. )
Getragen von der Flamme chapter 1 . 4/19/2006
The ending wasn't lame. It was good.
Savetheplanet chapter 1 . 4/17/2006
I like this story, it's funny. I think the bit where Holly tells Artemis she doesn't love him and then he pulls off her com-set and she gives him a different answer is the best part. Well done and keep writing!

~Savetheplanet :)