Reviews for End Game |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This 'waiting till you're married is a load of rubbish. I have known couples that do that and have found on the wedding night that they are incompatible eventually ending in divorce. I remember hen I was early teens and I not only knew what went where I was eager to try it and took any opportunity to peek at girls whenever I got the chance without the stupid embarrassment that many authors attribute to Harry. I admit that the situation with the Dursley's would cause him problems but this situation with sex is INSTINCTUAL. Boys WILL look at Girls and vice versa, probably with sexual thoughts in their minds, even if they don't completely understand it all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a nice little spin on how the actual story ended up. Great work! |
![]() ![]() I've read all 3 endings for your story, but I have to say, I think you wimped out by writing 3 endings. If you believe Harry would be best partnered with Hermione, then just write that story and be done. There are several reasons why I feel Hermione is the better partner: Ginny has been ignored a lot (brothers always ignore their icky, baby sister; she managed to be possessed and nobody noticed). She's likely to want to be in the limelight, be seen at all the parties. Harry prefers to stay out of the limelight. Ginny has been poor all her life. She's likely to take spending Harry's vast wealth to excess. Ginny's got a hot temper. Harry doesn't need hot-tempered people in his life, after how Vernon always blew his top at Harry. Ginny's got a jealous streak; Harry has a lot of female friends - she'd always be accusing him of cheating, when there was nothing going on. Hermione has always supported Harry - not the myth, but the man. Harry can never be sure deep down, if Ginny really loves Harry, or The Boy Who Loved, no matter what Ginny says about it. Still - good story. I'll be bookmarking these 2 stories, then reading more of your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. I love the conclusion and I love the fact that you gave everyone the happy ending they wanted. can't wait to read more of your stuff. thanks for sharing |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great read all around. Refreshingly creative, not excessively gratuitous in how external references were used, and satisfying. Cheers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A brilliant speech. Rarely do fanfics with speeches manage to carry and convey that sense of weight and gravitas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Against the backdrop of Dumbledore's speculation that love is the power that Voldemort knows not, it was an inspired choice to set the date of the final confrontation on Valentine's Day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Werewolf?" "There! There wolf" Your stories make me smile, and I love good (and bad) puns as well. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Como seguidor de la pareja H/Hr, obviamente este es mi final. Por eso esta reseña va en este capítulo. Extraordinaria historia, sobre todo el epílogo, con todas las ramificaciones posteriores. Quedé gratamente sorprendido con el discurso de Harry, sinceramente lo disfruté mucho. Solamente queda felicitarte y agradecerte por hacerme pasar un muy placentero rato de lectura. Insisto en que vuelvas a retomar tu pasión por la escritura y compongas nuevas historias sobre esta pareja tan perfecta. Saludos! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked the way Voldy was killed. I think just like Harry, for a better world other creatures should be treated properly and not as if we were superior. None of the endings hit me, I feel that something was missing. The first one I liked a little more. Kira |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that Ginny finally realizes that she likes the real Harry. Peter is like the pimples that Fred and George got in the book the order of the Phoenix. I hope Charles is well. I think Voldy is a coward. I'd like Remus to be the one to take Peter down. The beginning of the end. Kira |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked that Harry suggested going to see the Grangers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The truth is that Blaise is an idiot and is not that different from Malfoy. I hope that soon they will say what they feel. Kira |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ron is a jerk. I understand that Harry is a turtle in matters of love but drugging him is not a solution. It seems to me that Voldy is having a tremendous battle. Kira |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the gift Harry gave Hermione. While Harry is to blame, much of the responsibility for their friendship being complicated lay with Hermione. Rita thought she was going to get away with it. Poor Lily, she had to have a horrible time. Kira |