|Reviews for His Eyes|
| Rainbor123 chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
That was cute! :)
| raerobgal chapter 1 . 4/12/2013
I didn't think Raven was too OOC in this to be honest, since you write her really well anyway!
The idea that she didn't want to see his eyes was really unique, and I am so glad to have read it ! Even though it's short, I really did like it :)
| RandyWrites chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Definitely not too OOC. Not OOC at all! A very short & sweet oneshot. I've been trying to review some of your fics that I've read, but missed, finally have time to get to some! XD Seriously, you're just an awesome author!
I liked this one, mostly because of how well Raven's voice was kept in-character (though that last line at the end, had me thinking "Tara Strong with british accent" 0_e) & because it's an interesting idea, and very romantic & sweet, how she wants him to keep the mask for her own well being. Definitely well done! Bravo!
| xXxTsukuyomixXx chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
Lol! So adorable! I love how you portray her exactly like the real Raven. And the mask thing.. I can so totally see that being true ) Heehee! So friggen cute!
| Weaving Bard chapter 1 . 7/27/2007
"if I loved you"...
goes off to cry
| Aileene chapter 1 . 2/25/2007
I think this was great, I think it works because it is obviously an internal conversation and I would imagine that when all her emotions are involved that she doesn't sound like the Raven we all are more aware of.
It makes me wonder though, when Robin does take his mask off, does he look for that stumble? that glazed look in her eyes?
This was great,
| Final Fight chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Take off the mask!
| Brimseye chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
hey again! :p i know i just e-mailed you like five minutes ago but this one is different cuz i just read His Eyes and thought it was good(if a bit mushy for Raven lol) and what does OOC mean? k bye!
| LM22102 chapter 1 . 4/4/2006
.. I cannot believe there are so many things I haven't read. I am ashamed of myself, as I told you before, that I haven't come to see you!
I mean, I haven't read this! Nor reviewed this! I haven't even knew it existed until I got the update for Instinct 2!
Good God, You wrote like three more, and a collection of one shots! I need to get to those!
I'm excited, yes. Yes, yes, yes! I also need to read your LJ! I am so behind!
Forgive me! I'll fedex you ramen cup noodles!
| Toboe LoneWolf chapter 1 . 3/24/2006
...A more sucky title would be: "His Blue Eyes" Or "His Hidden Blue Eyes." So no, it's not /that/ bad...XD
It kinda sounds like Raven has an accent here. Or something. With the phrases "be in some fine shape" and "bloody likely" it's a bit different then "regular" Raven phrasing...then again, this is her inner thoughts. Perhaps her other "personalities" leaking in? XD
Interesting concept here. Raven not wanting/needing to see Robin's eyes, that's understandable. But the reason why being that she sees herself, her missing self...now /that's/ interesting. Usually it's the other way around, with the person seeing Robin's true self (or in sappy stories, ROBIN'S TRU LUV SHINING 4EVAMORE). I like this take.
I don't know if this merited an entire fic to itself though, you know? It could've been incorporated into a larger fic like "Moments" or "Impulse" somehow (...okay, maybe "Impulse" is pushing it...XDXD).
Heh. Don't let that stop you though, Em. Keep on writin'. XP
| finalitylife chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Well that was a humorous, slighly frazzled look into the thoughts of Raven. OOC? A little but nothing major. I don't know why but I always like stories when a character contemplates Robin's eyes and this short piece was an exceptional look at that with some great lines but you always have a penchant (is that the right word) for having some of the best lines I come across. So as always, another great job and hope to see more very soon.
| ravenslair chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
No, I don't think she was too OOC. Love can do strange things to you, even when your the ice princess. Nice one shot, Thanks...Gerry
| Tecna chapter 1 . 3/19/2006
That was excellent... I liked the one-shot, total fab!
| Zarola chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
Nope not completely OOC but completely outstanding
| dhk chapter 1 . 3/18/2006
I really enjoyed this; you had nice reasoning behind Raven's "motives," and did a good job expressing her emotions about the situation. Not too much to criticize, except when you wrote "wouldn't ever," which would be more clear if it was stated "would never." One last thing - I liked the end, but I thought the use of "bloody" in the last sentence took away from the overall impact. Anyway, all in all, nice job!