|Reviews for Hagane No Tsubasa: ALCHEMist CHoRNiCLE|
| FauN chapter 4 . 7/30
Well I guess there's no way you'll update now, but just for the record, your fic is great!
| XxxAnimeWolfxxX chapter 4 . 10/7/2012
I would lloooooooooovvvee to see this continued!
| Turtle Kid the Woolgatherer chapter 4 . 9/19/2012
I love Ed's kudan so far! I wasn't sure what it would be, but this definitly fits!
I'm enjoying this story! Thanks for writing!
| Athena's phoenix chapter 4 . 4/6/2011
this story is just sooooooooooooo great! I'm not sure if it will ever be continued, but I wish that it would be. good luck and keep on writing, please!
| Eriisu-April chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
Who-hoo! The first story of my new found addiction turns out to be really interesting! :D
While I can understand how a cookiecutter story can be boring if not handled corectly, I'm a long-time fan of the FMA anime and only just recently of Tsubasa Reservior Chronicle; so for me, retelling the story I can't find at the library will be awesome! I can also see a little way that Ed would look in WW2 clothing next to a ninja, a wizard, and a "normal" person. His alchemy is also a decent bridge between Faye and Syaoran's worlds, being both technological and fanciful.
And, ah, yes, Ed will be the shortest next to a lot of 6 foot people. That's always fun :)) O
| Cross - The Damned Alchemist chapter 4 . 5/30/2008
OH-H-H-H-H! PLEASE write MORE! I LOVE it!
| bloodred sapphire chapter 4 . 5/24/2008
hey. D I was searching for FMA crossovers with my other fave animes, and chanced upon this little beauty. I like how you kept Ed in character and put him so well into the story of Tsubasa using Clow Reed. Was there also a slight hint of CardCaptor Sakura (in the "rectangular cards"), or was that my imagination and sugar rush talking?
Anyways. I got slightly miffed by the fact that Ed had to relinquish his memories of the Gate. D: I considered suggesting that he would somehow regain the ability to use alchemy without a circle, then remembered that it was the Gate that let him do that in the first place. D:
However, these are the suggestions that got past the skeptical side of me:
why not let Ed and Envy become friends(love that pairing by the way; I'm getting sick of Ed/Winry) -or more; this is my sugar rush talking- in one world, but have Envy, along with Al, Roy, Hughes and maybe even Rose hate him (and the rest of the gang, of course) in the next world, wherein they must join forces with Cornello and Greed to survive? And yes, that sentence was way too long. D
Also, in the world where they meet the girl with the fan(I am so terribly sorry; her name escapes me) why not let the girlbe Nina (the one who was turned into a chimera along with Alexander, her dog, by her father, Simon) and let Kishimu, the woman in a chamber in the palace with long nails, be Lust, although everyone probably saw that coming 44,0 miles from the moon.
Also, twist the plot a bit more, and add a few more animes (only if you can), and add more height-anger management problems and screaming fits for Ed, seeing as Fay and Kuro are extremely tall.
also, and I was nervous typing this, why not let them obtain/acquire something very important to Yuko, and in return for it, they ask for what they gave back, but not quite get it; Ed does not get the full knowledge from the Gate, Fay's magic is limited/weakened, Kuro can only use Ginryu when his life or the life of someone close to him (emotionally) is threatened, and Syaoran and Sakura's relationship is more than brother-sister but not what it was or would have been.
that's all I got. D
I love the leech scene, by the way, and I like how the suit of armor is his Kudan.
Update soon please!
Keep up the awesome work!
| jessie chapter 4 . 5/20/2008
ehxhfdl14 is right plz update soon medesperate reader is w8ing
| Amayada chapter 4 . 12/20/2007
who would have thought that tsubasa crossovers are this good...this is so awesome...please update soon...I really really can't wait to read your next chapter...
| Xoroth chapter 4 . 10/30/2007
An interesting story. Pretty good so far.
| WildfireDreams chapter 4 . 8/4/2007
Ok, absolute BEST FMAxTRC cross yet! Obviously anime based on the FMA side (which for this particular version of a cross between those two makes MUCH more sense)
Really can't wait to see more of this. Please write more soon.
| digiwriter1392 chapter 4 . 6/19/2007
Nice story. I hope you update it soon!
| DeletedAnon chapter 4 . 6/15/2007
AH! UPDATE! UPDATE! Please update! Desperate readers are waiting!
| chaosknight chapter 4 . 6/15/2007
Great story. Update soon.
| Opalalchemy chapter 4 . 6/11/2007
please update soon