Reviews for Sleepwalking
dreamlifter chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Great use of repetition in the dialogue
The Silver Feathered Raven chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
You know, it is very, very nice to find something about Genma where he isn't characterized as a womanizer. The repetition in this was very nice, and while I tend not to like shorter stories, this one actually had substance. Very nice characterizations, and the color imagrey fit in very well.

Raven
kakashidiot chapter 1 . 4/18/2006
She only thought he seemed lost, and maybe that was all these empty looks were supposed to say.

THAT IS SO SAD! WAH!

(sobs in the corner) poor Genma all alone! The way he was repeating stuff made me think of shell-shock or something like that!

At any rate, haunting, beautiful, nice characterized, well described - only issue is the shortness: you write so well, I wanted it to go on forever. But to be honest, the shortness might be part of the charm.

Keep it up! I'll be watching your profile!

Thanks for the Genma fic! I think we need more of him!
RedRibbonhood chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
Kawaii! it's so sad...but kinda cute...I never thought of Anko and GEnma together...interesting, well good job!
Jeebus dirtface chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Interesting...
One Who Rides On The Wind chapter 1 . 3/20/2006
Nice